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Read MoreComing storm, I am! Drifting, distant, dampness of rain from afar soddens your lips. Closer, the storm carries in gentle arms of swift winds, each drop of tear-showers.
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreMidnight Bells & the Rondeau: Love in the Shadow of the Purchase Louisiana had been returned to France from Spain and my gait had a new liveliness which could only be that of a lover. My fifty-year-old legs carried...
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Superb work, my friend.
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Thank you so much Thomas. I truly appreciate your reading and commenting on this. Really do, my friend.
John
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Read MoreUnder the slumping shoulders of the cafe's awningI watched tiny rain circles loosely burst in puddleson the ground whilemy hair lightly waved fromSeptember's weary winds.Nat King Cole sang softly"A Blossom Fell,"on small hanging speakers when she strolled byquickly catching...
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beautifully written I felt this 💕
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Thank you, Crimsin
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Best revenge, live happily ever happy without them holding a place inside you. Easy to say, I know. Yet, writing it out is also great therapy and makes you breathe better. Our success comes from trial and error. You succeed regardless.
Write it out amigo.-
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Thanks very much for your comment, Styx.
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Beautifully penned, Tim. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks very much, Damian.
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I note you still have it .. exquisitely poemed good sir .. Regards to both you n ya pen .. Neville
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I appreciate that, Neville, thanks. 🙂
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Read MoreDay And Night in the Hot South A strange scent, like vanilla transports us to an exotic land where birds of paradise warble and the whippoorwill sings a lonely song. In the muscadine wine dusk, we two souls sit...
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You’re such an excellent writer, John. There are so many rich lines that flow in this and I love the culture that emanates from it. In my mind I can hear “South City Midnight Lady,” from the Doobie Brothers.
Great story!
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Deep gratitude Tim. I very much appreciate your thoughts on this tale of mine. Really made my night. Love that you appreciated the culture emanating here. The scenes are the real place of my boyhood. Love that this reminded you of that song. Thank you so much.
John
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian