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Read MoreHe stalks along the fringes of the Sub- conscious Walks in comfort along the Bed of Coals that is your Soul Waiting for your eyes to close.... To depose you of your Sovereignty Hate-seeking in the darkness Looking to harness the despicable you Ride your E-motions...
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Big thx or droppin by, Damian. Glad you dug it!!
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Great piece of what’s up dude, we like this and the pic
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What’s up, bro? Glad you made a pitstop for this vibe. Thx!!
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
This opening, “He stalks along the fringes of the Sub- conscious” is a great setup for this piece. You get a sense of foreboding.
Dump you in the lost and found and the leave you used up and broken. I mean wow. Very strong emotions. Like this piece.
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I appreciate you givin this piece an encore read, Fia.
Your insights are always on point!Big thx
Naaj
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When you roll into soul excavation, you are at your most potent, my friend. This reads like a bell tolling or a fog horn blowing on a stormy night…Pay attention! Glad you brought this one back out of the archives.
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Big thx for droppin in, Willow.
This one opened up some memories indeedAlways appreciate you
Naaj
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We gonna see a little Schizophrenic Scripture hitting the screen? 🤞😉
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Soon, Willow. It’s a coincidence that you mention that one particular vibe cuz I’ve been digging in the crates recently trying to pace out my writings.
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Read MoreI hate sexting.We used to love sexting.I thought I’d give it another try.I sent her a text that goes like this:“My back is hurting me, I need a massage.Do we still have some massage oil?Or shall I buy some...
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Read MoreRestless nights miles from sleepWitnessing the light fading fastWithout reward the price is steepCan’t outrun this troubled past Once crippled with silent ragePinned beneath a heavy stoneBattered heart in a dusty cageDesperate days spent all alone Hateful acts forged in painA...
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Fantastic, Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This is a dark piece, but it is really good. Thank you for sharing it.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I know it’s kinda dark, it came out of nowhere. lol. I’m in a good mood still. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Excellent piece.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Peter. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Well look at you being all dark after Christmas:)
Each section had its own dark point of view.
I really enjoyed the stanza about evil hiding in the mundane
It reminds me of the saying in the Bible. Idle hands are the devils workshop.Great piece amigo!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Also my favorite stanza as well. I was kinda going for the idle hands vibe. Wasn’t meaning to be dark at all, this write came out of nowhere. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian very darkly powerful ❤️
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fantastic piece of dark poetry my friend. Wonderfully executed.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It certainly spawned out of nowhere. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Heavy hitting vibe, bro This moves the mind down some chambers
Much respect
Naaj
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Naaj. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Sometimes you gotta just roll with the punches. Appreciate you.
Damian
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A bittersweet piece, so beautiful and sad! I am glad that you reassured us that you are doing well , dear Damian!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Well I didn’t want anyone worrying about me, and I was happy while I wrote it. It’s kinda like a rain storm while the sun is still shining kinda vibe going on here. So bittersweet fits it perfectly. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This reads like a slow descent through psychological aftermath—the kind that doesn’t announce itself loudly but corrodes over time. The imagery stays grounded while the emotion escalates, especially the idea of evil hiding in the mundane. Quiet, heavy, and effective.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You got all that out of this write? lol. I’m just joshing you. Seriously though, your commentary really means a lot to me as well as your continued support my friend. You’re a gifted writer and I’m a fan of yours as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I can see why others see this is dark, but I read it more as a reflective piece on darker moments. Like sitting under moonlight and remembering full darkness of troubled days…having just enjoyed the warmth of a fire and full spirit. There are definitely elements that lean into darker aspects, but if we’re not peering into those corners, are we really paying attention, or are we just living in denial? To be all sunshine and daisies in the current environment is pure folly. I don’t see dark, I see the shadows that follow us wherever we go. The hope that we still find light. Follow that muse where it takes you, my friend. It never leads you astray
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I always enjoy your commentary, this one is reflective in a sense. Darkness does hide in those corners always lurking in shadow and watching our every move. To believe it doesn’t exist is denial I agree 100% Appreciate you.
Damian
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this is extraordinarily noir if you don’t mind me saying .. just saying .. Neville
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I don’t mind you saying at all, that’s cool with me. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerfully penned, Naaj. Excellent write my friend. I dig this. Much respect.. Appreciate you.
Damian