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There’s a raw, searching honesty in this. you can feel the questions shaping the voice that would come later. The repetition of the dark works like a pulse, steady and human. A strong beginning, and you can already see the spark you kept.
P.S. I’m so glad you broke out that notebook my friend.
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I like how your poem methodically draws the reader in. Perhaps time management is what separates the men from the boys. There is a difference between a kiss and a lip service. Desire is a language…very uniquely true.
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Passionately penned, CG. Excellent write with many layers my friend. This one is more than meets the eye. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerfully penned, Brandon. That’s an amazing write for anyone, makes it that much more impressive at 16 years old my friend. I still I have my first notebook as well, have never posted them though. Welcome to Stars Rite! Appreciate you.
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