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Ha .. Bless you Fia .. I’m afraid the clock eventually caught up with me .. but that aside .. I’m sure you already know that a true gentleman never tells .. 😎💛👍
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Certainly your art is the real one! the art that shapes the inner self caring less about the materials, sure we (specially us women😏) should take care of our outside beauty but not neglecting the inside one, inner beauty shines on the face, outside beauty feels hallow. and don’t worry, even if we are good with our art, it doesn’t mean that we can get the specific man we want lol, anyway… I love this smart, brilliant one dear Neville, good coffee ☕ morning and POETRY (hint!) ;)..
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I’m still struggling to get a handle on this site my friend .. But You are incredibly insightful, astute, self aware and bloomin kind .. Thank you so much for the visit and your understanding .. Neville 🌻⭐💛👍
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Cleverly penned, Neville. I got a sense of Deja Vu, that ending seems familiar. Excellent write my friend. I can relate. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Bless you Damian .. and back at ya my fine literary friend .. Neville 😎👍
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Read MoreA caring home was an old man's residenceDementia robbed him of remembranceThough his memory was dark and greyHis wife came to visit him every dayShe did her best but it seemed certainNothing would lift forgetting's curtain She brought their dog...
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Oh dear…..honesty is not always the best policy.
Poignant but beautiful.❤️-
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Suffering from dementia is hard – for the patient and for their family as well. I know a woman who stood by her mentally disturbed husband strong as a rock. She told me, ‘I know who he is at his core, that’s enough for me!
Thank you so much for reading and writing such a kind comment, ‘ dear Peter!
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So sad and then that ending…a surprise smile.
Your writing is vivid, Elke. I was there.
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Thank you very much for your kind comment, dear Jacob!
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No but for his last couple years, my dad was in a dementia unit.
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Powerfully penned, Elke. Amazing write my friend, such an authentic piece. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you very much for reading and writing such a kind comment, dear Damien! Highly appreciated!
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Hello Elke. Your writing captures so many emotions. This piece is sad but also lovely. A remarkable write for a remarkable poet/storyteller. xoxo
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So sad to fade…
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Fia Naturie posted in the group News and Suggestions
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Read MoreHow can I competeShe had trained you for her desiresShe tells you to count before you beginYou take deep breaths, trembling You either fear heror you desire her Lust or disgustRides you hard She tells you she wants you to play something...
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I love this piece. You create an excellent and interesting metaphor and you carry it through from beginning to end.
It really works and we feel the relationship between the poem’s subject and the piano.
nicely done, Fia.
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Thank you, Jacob ;))
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Fia….I thought it was more about a femdom sorta thing….still good either way.👍
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Haha..well you never know when I could pop a poem like that out. Thank you, Peter;))
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I just can’t imagine any hot blooded music loving fella NOT enjoying this & DEEPLY .. Bravo Mistress F .. Neville 😎👍
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Thank you, Neville.(big smile here);))
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excellent write
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Thank you, twoffthythree ;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Music is a seductive lady, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;)) Music is exactly that,
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Fia this was smoking. I love piano music and this is one of the most creative poems on seduction of a pianist I have read. I felt the flame of his helplessness because her womanly powers. Sizzling.
John
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Thank you, John;))
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Aww, that is insightful. As long as you did not do a “Hickory Dickery Dock” poem I am sure your poems landed it mark more often than you want to admit.