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LiLi is actually part two of Peyote, Thanks Lady
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I should have read that one first, then, instead of backward.
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It doesn’t matter, you read it which is cool
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Oh wow she went up in flames and covered you in ash. This is so good. I like how you started off with the roar of the engines. Like you want to rev up the intensity about to play out here.
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Well we saw her through a friend over at DUP, she was a true inspiration. Thanks Lady
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One word. Apocalyptic!
Like Tina Turner in Mad Max beyond the thunder dome.
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We try still wondering what happened with your reservation piece. LiLi was an actual goddess we don’t remember Aztec or Mayan we just decided to play with her with a poetess. Thanks
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It’s not a bad skill set to have, we personally know quite a few females that ride. Thank you for reading and commenting Lady
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Read MoreYou are like smoking a cigaretteI am addicted to your kisses and hugsAt three am at the parkMeanwhile I touch your smooth skinAnd hear your beautiful voice.
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give up tobacco
for
more
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I like it a lot. 🙂
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me too you
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🙂
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This is a peaceful piece with a tempting picture
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Beautiful work.
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Thank you Fia and Thomas for reading.
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Some people sit back and enjoy the scenery
Others want to memorize it and spread the word.
Thanks for sharing!
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Read MoreThe sun rose with a sweet scentMy death is callingYou cannot cheat deathThree lines down an arm proves it The moon runsAs the candy corn colored sky emergesEscape is not an optionThe knives have been sharpened I am not the first...
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Powerful stuff Fia
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Thank you,Peter;))
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Fantastic work. Powerful writing.
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Thank you, Thomas;))
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Heartfelt in a new way
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Thank you, Jim;))
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“The liver
The spleen
Rip out the intestines
Making me his queen”Amazing writing Fia.
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Thank you, Drieks
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Nice and dark Fia. I love the candy corn colored sky emerges line.
Death takes its bride one organ at a time. Sounds like horror to me and a good one for the halloween season. 🙂-
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Thank you, Tim. I had fun doing this one. The candy corn was a nice touch. Did a challenge with Twofiftythree. We had to write gore, and you have to add candy corn
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Hauntingly penned, Fia. Look at you writing horror, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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I am trying. I’m a complete chicken. Love vampires, werewolves etc….
Thank you, Damian;))
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Violent imagery & language apropos for an October horror film marathon. I’ve got some catching up to do, fer sure. Thanks for holding it down here at Stars Rite. Much appreciated!
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There are a lot of writers getting in the spirit of it.
Thank you, Benjamin
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Honest, morbid and great wording. A gorgeous piece, dear Fia!
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Thank you so much, Sappho
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It builds with a violent intensity.
Very apt for Halloween. But also death is always with us. All year round. You poem is very truthful.
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Thank you, Knight 🩷
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Your reflections on this conversation with death are the stuff of great poetry. Your poem is deeply felt and strong in imagery that is as poetic as it is strong. Truly a great poem.
John
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Thank you, John 🩷
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hello beautiful Fia powerful dark here but empowering too ❤️
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She sounds insatiable. Hmm, pleasure and pain. Sounds like a good Saturday night