Passionately penned, Eyes. Excellent write with nice wordplay my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

very much love your style! It’s special, personal, powerful and emotive. This speaks to me of unfair separation, there is big pain behind the lines that You only lead us to by glimpses. Great piece my friend 🤍

Chère E.,
Amen to that.
What a write! Love it a lot…
Warm regards, Gus

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ops sorry I already crossed the lake… you have to swim… as I said your poetry is always amazing

this is abosutely gorgeous lovely Fia this moved me greatly ❤️

Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write with some deep layers my friend. This gives me musing vibes.. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Oh wow…this one took me to a memory place. Amazing, Fia

I enjoyed this,Fia.

This form of poetry just takes you and pulls you into it. The subtly with the in-your-face parts are balanced nicely