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Read MoreI love youI have no guide to help meNothing to protect me from your stormI felt like an idiot sitting in your carYour face was so beautifulI didn't think I can love anyoneI love youWouldn't it be great if...
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Glad you enjoyed Fia. Thank you!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. I agree with Fia, this is a heartfelt plea, or a confession possibly. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for the comments!
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One powerful line. With many meanings. This is good.
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Appreciate that Fia. Thanks!!
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Powerful, Keith. Got me pondering.. Appreciate you, brother.
Damian
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Thank you Damian.
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This one line says everything. The power of opposites! They are the two sides of the same coin and prerequisites to conceive and appreciate the counterpart.
A great and meaningful statement, dear Keith!-
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Hello Elke. Thank you for the gracious comment. xo
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Right on.
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Thanks fellow poet.
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Read MoreLove Sonnet LXVII If I told you that I wanted you, would the stars fade out? If I asked you to stay, would you lie down with me, sing songs to my heart? If you asked me to stay, I would share my life, my...
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Now you mention it and so eloquently .. I think that many of us have been there and asked the same searching questions .. Write on brother Curt .. You do it so well .. Neville 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
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5 stars and a thumbs up, Neville, you are too kind. Thank you!!
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My absolute pleasure .. 😎👍
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Brilliant and sweet. Excellent.
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Hi Thomas, thank you for those kind words. They are much appreciated.
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This ones of those that is written in simple words yet because the feelings are real and genuine, it’s like the only way to reflect these feelings is by the simplicity. no big words, no complication, it is as it is. It reads for me as a song of love and life, a sweet sad love song.
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Forgot to mention the word sentimental too, it’s a sentimental poem/song.
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It’s always a pleasure to read your comments, Light. Thank you for dropping them. Some poems are meant to be stated straight up, like driving a fast moving car and eyes on the road ahead. While some poems are meant to said softly, with flowers strewn across the road and lots of detours to smell them. I like your take on this poem.
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And You said it as it is in a poetic way~ and You are very welcome~
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Thank you, Mary. But those dots at the end of your words, please continue!! ;0)
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Read MoreI Walk Alone dusty, well-worn moccasins travel through mesa shadows, windblown arroyos, along dry river beds of delusions alone with myself. steam from hot rocks surround naked skin attempting to cleanse the death that follows me; cleanse my wolf spirit so that I may run, alive, breathe in high mountain air, drink...
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Favorite line: You cannot cleanse the loneliness, and the sun shines in rainbows, and clouds speak to grandmother moon. This is a wonderful piece of poetry
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This is such a heartfelt plea. I felt this.