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Read MoreGirl, your silver-tipped prose was going to haemorrhage me word circus turned me to clown In octagon of mirrors in the gallery cafe where lipstick palimpsest on coffee cups colour rouge all the shades of desire, I viewed her nipples from eight different angles through the ‘God?’ emblazoned on her thin t-shirt, reflected to crack’d promises who dared walk on broken ice? China...
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thanks fia
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Read MoreI am not the sunrise but I should be I should be a cascade of wind an unfinished scent the geometry of words starting a fresh poem allowing the lines on my face to tell it all leak the shade of grief I should be an ounce of...
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This is tender. A nice tribute to her. Sorry for your loss.
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Thanks Fia.
This was actually the last ever poem she wrote before the morphine, methadone and chemo took hold of her skull. She was very popular in DU. The truth lies on her death bed and with her children – but as I scribbled in the summary, deluded narratives prevented you all to say a proper goodbye. A huge fucking shame and shameful.
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Lovely sad beautiful poem.
Thanks for posting 🙏
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Thank you. All plaudits to the author, who sadly, was taken way too young.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks, my friend.
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Thank you so much.
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Amazing story. The shoes we wear say a lot about who we are. I like the Hendrix lyric “His dusty boots are his Cadellac”
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Thank you, my friend. I appreciate it.
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Powerful and vivid
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Thank you Thomas.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. That’s a severe case of road rage. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It is a severe case. No doubt. This was a fun write. Thanks my friend.
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Sarcasm – black as the night! You’re a true master of this art. Sarcasm – black as the night! You’re a true master of this art xoxo
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Appreciate the kind words Elke. Thank you!
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Read MoreHere comes the little manHe's really fucking shortBitter from an early ageWasn't born a midget or even a dwarf Never liked having to look upEvery time he needed to speakThey assumed he was an overgrown kidHe's about the height of...
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Aww that’s a sad tale. He should have seeked help
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Seeking help wasn’t in his vocabulary. He was a nut job. Thanks Fia.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Sounds like a Napoleon Complex to me. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yes it does. He needed to be locked up. Thanks my friend.
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Napoleons are a fucking nitemare, especially when one is rather lanky. They start arguments in an empty room and are never, ever wrong. Kid you not. An angry little man once attempted to headbutt me and my stomach felt the full force of his forehead.
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They sure can be a nightmare. WOW that sucks. Did you kick him in the nads?
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This is a meaningful and powerful writing, dear Keith! You are creating attention for those people who are a little different from others and are therefore often mocked. Nobody is without any flaws. All of us should be more tolerant and supportive, and most important of all, focus on inner wealth instead of appearance. Of course, being mocked isn’t an apology but maybe the violence could have been prevented.
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Thanks Elke. I appreciate the comments..always.
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That was never enough? Very descriptive. Makes me wonder what would be enough. Nice piece