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Hello M.E. No humor in this one. A straight up piece regarding addiction. Thanks for the feedback my friend.
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Why do it at your friend’s place. Why not at a club or bar?
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Maybe she felt comfortable at her friend’s house. No telling on what she was thinking, she’s now dead. Thanks Fia.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. This one is a sad and unfortunate ending, but goes with the territory of addiction my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks my friend. Appreciated!!
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Such a sad ending..I know and love someone who struggles with addiction. I hate it, but like Damian stated before me, it comes with the territory. Well written Keith. xx
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It’s a sad world out there. Thanks my friend. xo
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Thank you Adira. Appreciated..xo
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Read MoreMy wife began singing yesterday morningwithin one hour, all of our livestock perishedshe's tone deaf and damn proud of itwithin the hour a cow, a pig & horse from out of nowhere came to our front doorthere were all...
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Brought me a smile. I somehow remembered Animal Farm. This one is morbid and funny. They did you a favor. Hahaha
Plz can you send me their phone number. My neighbour is tearing my eardrums.
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I’m totally calling the number on the card.
Damn neighbors! I’ll get you that number M.E..Thanks buddy for the feedback.
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Cleverly penned, Keith. Sounds like this could have been an old school cartoon my friend. With more gore and violence of course. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I love old cartoons from the 30’s. Something really haunting and dark about those shorts. Thanks Damian for the kindness.
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Read MoreSome monsters have always saidThere are humans under my bedOne of their names is TedThe other goes by DebThere are humans under my bedThey won’t eat me as long as their fedThere are humans under my bedTheir complexions are...
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I always love to grab monsters by their uncovered feet from under the bed
Thats what I said.I love the idea in this one! “)
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Glad you enjoyed this write. Appreciate it.
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Cleverly penned, Keith. A very powerful read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian.
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Read MoreDrifting out of focus is commonplace Happens every single day my friend Got lost in traffic avoiding the rat race It’s a constant hustle avoiding the end Some facts didn't enter the equation To be honest some weren’t thought of I was a party looking...
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Keep moving forward my friend. There’s always a light at the end of the tunnel. Great poem.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Always moving forward. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It’s a lot to carry. I’ve only been in the support role for people struggling, my daughter for one. But I see how heavy it can get to keep up the mask & maintain a facade of functionality. You’re right, it changes people. Im glad you’re no longer that person, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Yes, in my case it brought out bad choices, poor judgment, and being a real pain in the ass for sure. I’ve been married going on 19 years. I asked my wife a few months back, “How the hell did you put up with me for the 16 years I was an alcoholic?” Her answer was simple, “Because she loves me.” Then she proceeded to describe the hell I put her through, in detail” I deserved every word of it too. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I think sometimes we get shackled by our passed. I was thinking about that while going through some of my old DUP post. It’s nice to see the creativity, but they were wrote from pain.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Fortunately, or unfortunately as the case may be, as a writer I’ve left a roadmap of my life in my writes. Sure, you’ve done that as well, you said so above in so many words. Pain is part of that for me, but it has so many more faces than that. It’s like a ride I couldn’t get off of, the cycle repeats over and over, a vicious circle. Sorry, for ranting. Your comment made me reflect a little, it happens. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The poems written from our pain, are probably my favorite. Not because they are from pain, but because something so raw, and so beautiful can come of it. This was a beautiful ode to your former self, and I’m proud of you, Damian. It’s not an easy feat, but you beat the odds and became a better version of yourself.
I wish you all the best for the future my friend.
xx~P.G💋
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, P.G. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I know what you mean, believe me I do. I like a former songwriting partner in my life used to always talk about if you’re miserable you write better. Don’t know that I believe that theory anymore, I believe it’s if the subject matter strikes a nerve. Then a writer will get raw, even down and dirty sometimes. Thank you, so much for the kind words about me being a better person, and yes even in a better place, I’m truly blessed, indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That’s an interesting story, sometimes anything can throw the switch, to obtain that moment of clarity. I still have like 4 beers in the fridge, that have set there for over two years. So I can relate, I keep meaning to throw them out, I just forget they are there sometimes. At first it was motivation to see them, and ignore the temptation. But I’m past that now. I’m glad you got to know your grandfather, the better version of himself. I’m a better version now as well. Thanks so much for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I know I enjoy reading dark stuff. But somehow I didn’t find this one amusing. I guess thats the point which you hit exactly in the bullseye. Well written buddy!