Welcome back

Great! Happy to see you here. Big hug.

hi Keith this is very honest❤

If they were Krispy Kreme, I might understand the urge. But wow, Vol, this is so upfront and in your face, I think it
simply broke the mirror.
j.

Powerfully penned, Keith. Great write my friend, you still bring it. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is a hard hitting piece that tells more about the state of the relationship than about the outer appearance of this woman. If he looked at her with the eyes of love, everything about her from the messy hair to the stained dressing gown would appear beautiful to him. He would only see her inner beauty. But between the couple you describe there isn’t much love anymore.
Perfectly observed and put into words, dear Keith! Xoxo

Kinda felt that way about my first husband. I have referred to him as Fat Boy and tiny-dick. Worst was that despite being nearly 400 lbs (I always say 600) and having a “stub” – he cheated! Add in the violence and threats…I wished for him to die.
It took 20 years after I left but he’s gone!

DAMN! I believe you mentioned “fat boy” & “tiny dick” in a few of your writes. Appreciate the feedback, always!

Well, Damn, the reiteration of Go look in the mirror is a banger. People generally do not see what they become until they are forced to. Keith very, very open write

A picturesque vignette, open ended, as if waiting the next breath 🌼

Average Joe, many thanks for your review, it really is much appreciated. Taking a next breath is always welcome, sir!

Sweet brief insight into your life. Thanks!

This was a beautiful walk along a path of life’s moments. Caught myself smiling all the way through

I love the photo, and the words just ooze romance. Makes me wish I had a similar memory to recall. Oh, well, I can still enjoy the experience. Knowing me, that kiss would have been longer.

this is beautifully written in tempo and content❤

Many, many thanks, new friend!!

Beautifully penned, Emma. Stellar imagery, great write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian