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Read MoreIn this cafe, with dirt for wallpaper. The heat is a bitch, and the fan in the ceiling is the worst— turning counter-clockwise. Sipping on my cup of coffee and milk. Too many flies, buzzing, fighting over throne, fighting over food, fighting over fly-chicks. Whatever they are fighting for— only that...
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A hot and lonesome summer day. “)
Thank you, Fia!
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Chewing gum, or strawberry. My favorite flavors since childhood. 😀
Thank you, Adira! Your comments make my day! “)
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I swear I know these moments. Drags & weighs the body down. This is a doozy
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Yeah. I am sorry you can relate to this. Thanks, willlow for reading! “)
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Thats what it was called back then. “)
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Cleverly penned, M.E. Relatable write my friend, we’ve all been there. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you brother! Highly appreciated! “)
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Don’t want to be there but you forced me in this place with your detailed writing. DAMN GOOD! If you want an ice cream cone, go to Dampkitten’s poem “Poetspeak Sweet”. There you’ll find an ice cream cone and a whole lot more.
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I apologize. It got to be written and vented. Thank you for reading and liking it! “)
Hmm..I’ll check it out rn. Thanks “)
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Yeah, they have bubble gum ice cream, and it’s gross. Also, have you tried the cotton candy green seedless grapes? My God, they taste just like it. Weird.
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Bubble gum flavour id gross! I disagree. But hearing of cotton candy green seedless grapes, I think you are right about the bubble gum flavour in there. Hahaha.
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LOL… I thought you were referencing my poem from the beginning. And now, I find out you like strawberry ice cream. OMG. By the way, is this ‘mosquito wing’ phrase an allusion to Smells Like Teen Spirit?
You do realize that you could enter this poem in the ‘coffee’ poem contest don’t you?
You will find this extremely weird, but the imagery in your piece is very reminiscent of the hotel scene early in the movie, Apocalypse Now.
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Lol. I saw your poem after our fellow poet: visions_of_insanity’s recommendation for ice cream. It ended up another type of ice cream. Lol
No. But I liked the reference. I had another poem that I have lost, where I referenced Nirvana’s Smells like teen spirit.
Mosquito’s wings here symbolize inferiority. For their tiny wings comparing with flies. Idk why it came to my mind. But I used it.I didn’t know about the contest. The setting of this poem is in a cafe but the themes has nothing to do with coffee.
I don’t remember this scene. I think I’ll rewatch it one day.
Thank you for reading and for the comments, DK. “)
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Powerful work, my friend.
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Thank you, Thomas! “)
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Holy Shit, you won! Congratulations, M.E!
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Mosquito wings comes with mosquito responsiblities. The limitless ability of sucking. Hahaha
Thank you, DK! “)
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Damn mosquito…no chance with all those flies, just keep them off my ice cream cone.
This is so powerful in its imagery…and such a disgusting place…I think I will get my cone to go.j.
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Thank you Jacob! Appreciated. “)
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NAAJIR wrote a new post
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Read Moreshe railed and railed incessantly 'bout sumthin i did the other daybitchin about this that n the thirdit was blah blah blah mixed with a bunch of epithetsfuck you muthafucka...blah blah blaharrogant piece of shit...blah blah blahself centered bastard...blah blah blah and a blah...
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Haha… thx for the affirmation hun
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Cleverly penned, Naaj. All they have to do is ask, I concur with this logic my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It’s the passive-aggressive judo they get a kick out of.
I’m game…makes the sex more intense.Always, big thx for the support
Naaj
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I think they know but they be too much in their feelings these days….
Big thx for the energy Hun…always
Naaj
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreI am on fucking firefrom the top of my head to the bottom of my feetThe fire started from withinBlood drips from every openingSizzling the moment, it hits outer skinI want to cryBut I can notI screamed so loudyou...
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Great write Fia.
I think we’d agree we aren’t our bodies.
Somewhere in the spaces between our cells , our atoms, is our consciousness…but that’s not us either.
We cling to our notion of self but really are non self.Nothing.-
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Thank you, Peter that is a profound statement. I believe we are more.
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Phenomenally penned, Fia. This was a powerful write my friend, I think our soul is our mind. It makes sense to me anyways. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That is definitely a thought. Thank you Damian
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The Heart & Soul is everything to a person’s existence. The brain is just there to put it into words. Great piece Fia. xo
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Thank you, Keith 😊
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreYou wanted me to be good I tried, really, I did Is being good something in one’s DNA? Once the door closes The lock is in place The shred of goodness is decimated I see you and the energy around you Red and pulsating Need radiating from...
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Damn, Fia. This write burns hotter than a thousand suns my friend. I’d need to build an Igloo just to cool down after reading this one. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Nice. Love that comment, Damian. Appreciate it
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Mmmm!!!! Yes Fia, I do enjoy a nice toy 😉 this was spicy and positively delicious. Keep em cummin!!
xx
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That is the goal girl. Yes, you do the same ❤️
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Sizzling hot!!!!!!!!!! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXO
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Ooo, thank you 😊 Keith xoxo
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SUCK
BIG LIKE
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Thank you, PoetSpeak 😊
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Fia Naturie posted in the group News and Suggestions
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Sounds hot and sticky. A summer day.