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Thank you! I love evoking emotions in readers.
But in “The Blue Lagoon” (part two), the heroes actually survived. In my story – no. No chance 😉
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I agree with Al this was unsettling. Well written and conveyed allot not leaving the mind to wonder what happened next.
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Thank you 🙂
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Read MoreVika carelessly pulled her jacket over herself, habitually wrapped a scarf around her neck, and left the apartment. Even this now seemed unnecessary and excessive. Why bother? With the decision made, it was completely pointless. Except perhaps to smoke...
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What a story. I like the banter back and forth between them and how she actually listened to the old man when he talked. The conversation about brings loved one’s back is one I find interesting because would they want to come back to this world in the state it is in? Welcome to Stars Rite
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Thank you! I’m glad you liked the story 🙂
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Powerfully penned, D. Excellent storytelling my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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Interest concept for a short story. The search for immortality in technology. It’s right around the corner which makes this write right on time! Enjoyed the read.
My finance very much wants to have his consciousness downloaded and saved. I’m not so sure. Lol
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Thank you for your kind words. I think one way or another we’ll all become immortal in the stars 🙂
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Oh, dear! I misunderstood the assignment and added the first chapter of the Mummy Issues I as a separate essay … LOL To make it up to my readers I added two more chapters, and this time I did it correctly, under the same series
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Unsettling and very depressing, Dmitry. All those post-apocalyptic stories are horrid in their own way, but this was extra painful as the main characters were kids. Your story reminded me of the movie The Blue Lagoon from 1980. Two teenagers stranded on a deserted island and tried to cope with the situation the best they could. They even had a baby of their own, and at some point they saw no other way out, and decided to end their lives by eating some poisonous berries …
Al