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Read MoreThere's a big old steel gate around her graveThough It makes no difference - crypt or cave'Cause clocks won't tell the time of dayTo those that sleep in dirt or clay. It's dark - it's deep - what's small will...
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Interesting comment, Crimsin. Thank you.
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I’m digging dark Tim!
These two stanzas build quite the image and feeling.
Truly enjoyed this other side of your writing:)-
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Thanks very much, Adelly. Much appreciated. 🙂
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Well this is interesting! I love the tie in with her as the subject header. It’s a tight rhyme scheme, very clever.
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I appreciate your comment, Styx. Thank you.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Cleverly penned, Tim. Excellent write with amazing flow my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you my friend. 🙂
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Damian DeadLove and
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read MoreCan’t go back to the way it was before The storm stripped the foundation bare Dirty secrets are used in keeping score Greedy pigs feast at the root of despair So many sleepless nights I’ve lost count Growing sick of seeing your fucking face An...
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I echo your thoughts Damian. I mentioned to a friend the other day that everything is corrupt now – Companies…people in business…the government…car dealers…you name it. It’s like we’ve gotten to a point where scamming people is the norm now. Great write my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That it is, everything is about turning a buck, with doing as little as possible. What’s saddest is it doesn’t bring them any happiness. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Oh you know I’m over here furiously nodding and grabbing logs for the fire. I have come to the place of having to mute and cover the face of the colostomy bag. It’s not worth the heart palpitations and anger rising. I refuse to allow my health to be further deteriorated by that overstuffed cheese puff. Another marshmallow, my friend? I’m adding wood to the fire!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I figured you might get fired up reading this one. I’m so tired of trying to figure out who’s still buying this bullshit, it can’t get anymore obvious that he’s out over his fucking skis, he’s beyond compromised at this point. I could go for a marshmallow. See you at the bonfire. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Oohh!
This just keeps building and the last line nailed it amigo.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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wowee this is menacing I can feel your heat and displeasure ❤️
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Well that was the desired effect, nice to know I delivered. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Talk about mic drops. Damn! Excellent my friend!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brandon. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian love your writes vuz. Always a deep thinking
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I try to keep things interesting. lol. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That it does, and it’s not pretty to watch. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Opposites and Gravitational Longing… Lemon tea, my friend, lemon tea!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, PAR. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Lemon tea, indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Your wording and poem is superb. Great piece for the deep thinker.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You rock, brother.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
Reach out
There are things I wanted to show
There are things I could not let go
When my light is finally out
I’m in the shadowReach out , reach out
You’re in my heart
Reach out
Whenever you feel you’re falling apart
Reach out
I will always be there for you….I’m here for you
You’re never alone, its true
Wherever I am is a hom…Read More1 Comment-
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I really like, it sounds like a song. To not give up or reminding someone that they aren’t alone but you are there. Nice write keep it up.
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oh beautiful Fia I can feel your giving heart here so lovely ❤️
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Thank you Crimsin<3
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Pure compassion here
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Thank you Willow.🧡
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Perfect! You going to do vocals for it?? Do it!
This is a catchy, lovable song! I love it! You did great!-
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Haha, no I have not sang in years. Thank you Styxian😊
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This is catchy and I loved how you ended it.
Being a home for love is such a lovely thought:)
Singing about it is even better!-
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Thank you Adel.😊
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Ana 1 ana 2 ana 3 ana 4 Wooooo yeah There are things I wanted to show
so I took off my clothes and then…..Well….anyway, not bad lyrics.
I’d love to hear a melody to it. Nice one Fia. 🙂-
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Thank you Tim😊
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent lyrics my friend. A lovely and compassionate write indeed. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian 😊 🧡
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this picked at my claustrophobic side very dark I myself want an ocean send off so I can be sand great write ❤️