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Aldo Kraas posted in the group National Poetry Month
Fine
Very fine
Like a worm
Shirt cotton threads pull
And fray
Bare skin
Pale skin finally
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This is exact, in that it leads the reader with a daring promise of heat, without scorching their eyes and ears with blatant words. It’s like lingerie verses naked; Make them yearn first, build the hunger.
You accomplished that well.
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Aldo Kraas posted in the group National Poetry Month
Don’t you forget about God
Kids it was you God that
Gave you life after
He created you
In his image
And now your kids are
Vaping
Also, you think vaping
Is cool
Kids you don’t know that
You are
Destroying your health
Also, you are going to
Die young
Also, your kids drink
Beer
Your kids are destroying
Your liver
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Thank you, Gus. I’m glad this one met you like that. And your hunger for the next makes me smile. 🙂