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Read MoreOur world as we know ittwisted brick by brickA world so twisted we kill our healthy and heal our sick Against our mother, pro all nature we bleed with vile religious crazeAll for war-induced pharmaciesin a 2 feet blinding maze This...
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Thank you for reading and listening! 🙏
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Epically penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics with a powerful message and being a rock/metal guy I love the arrangement. Nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian!
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I’m truly blown away by this.
I’m reading it as I’m listening to the audio clip.
This is a talented piece of art.
So articulate in its own way. I love it! x
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Thank you so much for your kind words Rosie! It really means a lot 🙏🏻
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Read MoreIntimacy left the bedroom, drifted quietly down the street. Wanting only human closeness, with no intent to cheat. It wandered past the neighbours, took a shortcut through the park. Noticed couples leaning inwards, who had not lost their spark. It walked backed twenty paces, sat beside a nameless...
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Cleverly penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian…..watch out for those Gnomes.
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I love the idea of this, the imagery. The whole gnome part almost, but not quite, adds a whimsy to it. Yet the despair overcomes that brief slide towards “not so bad”. The ending is perfect. The whole write is great stuff.
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Cool write Peter. Very creative.
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Read MoreI used to know her when we were ten.We spent a lot of time together.But I didn't know what it meant. She told me one day,please listen close.It's been a while,and we've gotten quite close.She used to take me out...
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I get way she loved you is different than the way she loved the other but you still reminis about it
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I am her by the way,it’s metaphorical
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Nicely done
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Read MoreThe silence is deafening, and profound Her absence makes the night feel so cold The air escaped his lungs now he drowns In the depths of hope taking a toll He prays amidst the ruins and ashes Yearning for that burning eternal flame Like impressions...
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Beautiful and a sorrowful piece ❤️
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Thank you Fia. It’s those writes that haunt that more profound…and everlasting.
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Powerfully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian, I’m kind of fond of this one for some reason.
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This is almost a cautionary tale. One never knows how life will go when someone you once imagined as a safe haven and one so desired disappears. Well done, Wally.
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Very true Tim. Sometimes unrequited or absent love makes for poetry with depth and longing.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Read Moretwinning knots of expression, winding themselves together on the atmospheresouls of no regard, gifting each other passiondeeply reaching into the wealth of the heartfinding thereselves in one anothers eyesfruition of desire long repressedcomes slowly but with a fierce strengthoddly...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for the love here ❤️
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I love the way you put this story together. A love intertwined.
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hello beautiful Fia good evening thank you graciously for such a lovely comment ❤️
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As always we read the piece first, then wondered what it would sound like. You never disappoint Lady, this is tight, that first stanza screams