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hello beautiful Betty I’ve missed you very much out of all the people I know I’m happy this poem spoke to you I hope you are doing well me I’m wandering ❤️thank you for being here…
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write as always my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian for the love on this write ❤️
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Read More“In the company of imageries within my castle, I voice for everyone my next poetic verse. All the empty halls listen and echo my passion, And in darkly rich verse I immerse.” Through the courtyard, pulls up a hearse, Beneath the arms of stone...
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This is so dark and haunting. fav line is “Their shrill shadowed the echo through these hollow halls,
“The dark-suited burial conveyance led amiss of a poet’s demise.”
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The cinderella comparison had me saying aww even though I was smiling while reading this piece
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A lovely write. Well written with some great rhymes!
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Backdeckbenny (Peter) wrote a new post
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Read MoreBiden calls it values.The missile is indifferent.The end justifies the means. Trump calls it winning.Facts are negotiable.The end justifies the means. Putin calls it history.Graves are future tense.The end justifies the means. Xi calls it harmony.Silence is compliance.The end justifies the means. Netanyahu...
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Very good. I just read that Musk said that death is faulty design and in the future we will figure out how to fix it.
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Thanks Fia.
Don’t normally agree with Elon but he is right that death will be eventually defeated by science but probably only for the rich.
You wouldn’t want the poor living forever now ..would you.
Seriously,who really wants to live forever..not me.
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Cleverly penned, Peter. Powerful write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreThe bed thumps rhythmically beneath you while youmake a grocery listand notice the weirdwater stain by the edge of the ceiling fanthe pace increases soyou stifle a half-assed moan and tilt your pelvis and wonderis thisis this…and you wait...
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Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian, I appreciate you right back.
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Oh-Wow! I absolutely loved this, Betty. Best wishes, Harriet-Jacqui Furl, published erotica author
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Thank you HJ. Back atcha!
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Betty love your writes. Wooo
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Thank you my sweet friend.
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Your pieces are always so stimulating Lady, to tight
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Hey ME!
It is tight as hell, my friend! (Kegals doncha know.)
Thanks my friend. Good to see you.
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What! Betty graces us with some creative writing here! Or, also known as Lillith has entered Eden! What!
“forearm against your pelvis” = Details are everything, and this is exquisitely precise to make it a real moment. That bit of control is boss!
Well you had mentioned that you were going to concentrate on erotica. So that explains this humdinger of a write!
The way you make it so realistic, without any overly porn promotion, shows your skill, ahem, at creative writing.
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My sweet, innocent brother-from-another-mother.
No, this was just some older stuff dusted off.
I have yet to write the porn.
It’s gonna be like a Gallagher show, you’ll need visqueen sheeting to avoid the splash zone.
JUST KIDDING…
MaybeHey, bro, thanks. I fucking adore you. Your critique matters and I really appreciate you for it. Thank you for being a fucking icon.
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Icon? Don’t be calling me no foreign little car made by Hundai !! I’m tall dammit!
Okay okay.
You are a premium writer, Betty. Any site goes up in value with you posting in it. It isn’t always about the subject matter. It’s the technique and ability of the writer that carries the weight. You are gold. -
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Gotta love the raw honesty spilling onto the page without restraint. “Are those your toes curling in the sheets?” it’s that damn good.
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LOL, thanks Wally. I appreciate you!
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I’ve missed reading your introspective heart. Beautiful as always.