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Read MoreOnce upon a time there was a moon.It glowed brightly.It went down and the sunshine showed up soon. And they shared the light daily and nightly.The moon said,you make me shine.The bond they shared all this time. But the sun said,don't...
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Read MorePrecious, yet brittle like a fiddle. Delicate, frail, alas cracked in the middle. Riddled by plagues, plagued by a riddle. Critically acclaimed yet worshipped by little.Pill popper's delight. Stage fright amongst a plethora of other might be reason why...
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Thank you for reading/listening!
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Brilliantly penned, Drieks. Incredible lyrics my friend. Tight rhymes, incredible wordplay, great phrasing, nicely done. Also dig the music. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian!
I’m so happy you like it! 🙏🏻
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This is so good. I can hear this as an opening to a show.
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Thank you so much Fia!
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Love this couplet
“Sanity was the place you thought you craved.
Serenity was a fable purposely misplaced.”You have some great lines in this piece.
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Thank you so much DK ❤️
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Damn, Naaj. That’s a hell of spill my friend. Very tight rhymes and incredible phrasing. Magnificent rap lyrics. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Since being on this site, I’ve been going through and reposting the archives of my earlier works from 2011 to 2013
I’ll admit it’s been fun goin back in time Big thx for the feedback, bro.Naaj
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Jade72 and
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Read MoreGuess it is true until my last breath—this real partnership with Death,lying with all that is still trueabout this life that wants to renew. Ever since that Friday phone call,how it then changed it all—how Cancer is along for the...
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Great job with the rhyming in this… engaging… carried me along…