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For some reason I was compelled to read this from beginning to end, and then reverse from the end to the beginning. The choice of words in this hook the reader so well. Short yes, but sweet. And done with skill and vivid imagery.
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Beautifully penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! This a magnificent little write here my friend. I mean I really dig the wordplay and imagery. Next level good. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Willow posted in the group National Poetry Month
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Detritus posted in the group National Poetry Month
Inner Shine
All three ponds filled up,
Two ducks wade through the speckled
Buttercup sunshine.
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This tells the reader what you mean but with finesse. Love it