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Thanks for appreciating the dance…and taking time to leave a comment; I am grateful.
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Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well.I’ve always thanked the forces, liberating us from the
Love
Love me do
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I love you
Tyranny.Looking back his Bobness only went half way…
Beautiful writes like this one do the rest.
Thank you for writing and posting.
Kind regards, Gus-
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Gus…thanks for the kind comment. I’ll always be true.
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A tendering, trembling new love indeed. Everyone can relate to this piece. Wonderfully done, RPM! Into the list it goes!
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Thanks Daniel! Honored to make the list!
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You can beat a drum and an egg of course but you just can’t beat a nice bit of gentle well stated erotica .. Neville
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Ooh, love that comment. Thanks a bunch!
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Sorrowfully beautiful. Truly artistry in language that flows all the way until the end. You have a talent with words that is exquisite even in its sorrow. Fine art here, my friend.
John
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hello dearest John bittersweet is love in my view thank you for the love on this ❤️
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Never got to read your writing….just couldn’t get past the image of that stunning woman you provided….lol
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hello dearest Benny yes she is stunning I was looking for a more mature woman to go with the poem thank you for your response I spend a lot of time for the right images ❤️
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Lovely, Brenda. Better to let go sometimes. Lovely!
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thank you graciously dearest Daniel I never really let go though ❤️
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Read MoreI have fallen in love with her,and I cannot stop my feelings. A rose blooms in our bed,blooming from a rainy summer. A white petal had fallen onto the bedcover,I picked it up, smelled it,and rubbed it on her lips.She still...
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Loved this so much Daniel. Enchanting and artfully crafted. I was mesmerized as the scene unfolded through your words.
John
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This read for me as an emotional sensual journey with such poignancy at the end. Truly deeply felt poetry at its finest.
John
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Passionately penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I felt the burning of this piece. Well done!
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No one wants to be the one to say hi first. Everyone thinks that the other person has a hidden agenda. This is an interesting outlook. Never wanted to be a boss. You know I talked with people in charge and some said that they felt the same way.
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I try to tell myself that those thoughts are just delusions. But the mind does play tricks.
Thanks for the read friend.
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Powerfully penned, Nick. It’s a different world out there, dig this write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Different and strange.
Thanks for the read friend.
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Seems like there’s a mass apathy sweeping the human race these days. Smile & get blank eyes. Or a frown. It’s rather disheartening…I find myself becoming more reclusive everyday. Not a good thing either, but at least alone explains the silence. Great reflection
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Honestly I wish I could just lock myself in my house. I get so tried of people. It has become a hostile world.
Thanks for the read friend.
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A firestorm of beauty and passion as I read and this unfolded. Tenderly written with exquisite attention to the encounter told both emotionally and physically in a dance. Loved reading this.
John