• Steely Dan song meaning theories explained: Aja’s one of my favorites….the “dude ranch above the sea” is a rehab facility, the song’s narrative is about someone getting off the junk (all his “dime-dancing is through”)…In verse two the “hardware” he’s “throwing…Read More

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    • Donald Fagen and Walter Becker were studio geeks. Perfection is what they strived for in their music. And they always had A-list talent in the studio. Like Mr. Gadd as you just referenced. Gotta respect “The Dan” Great song by the way. Appreciate you. – Damian

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    If I Had Turned Around

    Rewriting Memories   If I had turned around that night and went home I believe I would have ended up dead The guilt I held never left me alone Filling my head with never ending dread   If I had turned around that night and gone...

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    Blow Daddy

    Blow Daddy
 Front seat
 At a railroad crossing
 Long freight train moving slowly
 Eyes closed
 She’s working her magic
 Deep South
 Things amble along
 He’s about to release
 Last car passes
 Horns honk
 He spews
 Onward with ecstasy
 Rear view mirror
 Guy behind him is pissed
 Let him wait

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    • Haha,,,I love how you show what is happening all around. Then the let’m wait had me smiling

    • Hey man, how’s it going? It’s been a while since I read your posts. Great write. No apologies here. Fuck em!

    • Hey Keith
      Word up ?
      Haven’t written much since the DUP demise but thought I should contribute some smut again !!

      Thx bro

    • Hi P.,
      I may have told you I’m a quarter French.
      And in France you can get away with pretty much anything as long as you mind your language.
      Like this one. Direct, no unnecessary chatter, love it!
      Needless to say I’m a huge fan of your writes.
      Kind regards, Gus

      • There used to be TV show called DRAGNET. The main character played a police detective and he was known for saying “just the facts” .
        So Gus, that’s what I modeled my writing on. Just the facts. Say what I want to say and not much more.

        A blow job doesn’t need many words, just the passion of someone giving and someone getting …

        Thanks for your comment…

        Stay tuned

    • Passionately penned, Speak. Another excellent write my friend. You always bring you A-game when it comes to telling a story or painting us a picture. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Thanks Damian

        I don’t writhe much anymore but occasionally a thought comes to mind and I pen it.

        Appreciate the nod !

    • Hahaha, don’t know if you intended the humor but it’s there. What else is there to do while waiting on a mile of rail cart. To be honest we really miss those long trains passing by forcing the entire south to slow down even more. America doesn’t use but a fraction of it’s railway potential anymore, we use to move shit

      • Humor, mirth and a little attitude …
        I’ll tell you one thing, that woman knows what she’s doing …
        She calls it her salvation à la mode ….
        I call it bliss

  • he knows the sound of my breath
    as it catches
    hovering over his words
    like a hummingbird
    imbibing
    on the intoxicating nectar
    of his expression

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    Whispered Intensity

    he knows the sound of my breath as it catches hovering over his words like a hummingbird  imbibing on the intoxicating nectar of his expression

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    • This tells the reader what you mean but with finesse. Love it

      • Thank you 😊 It was stupid o’clock in the morning so it’s short, but it says what’s important to me

    • For some reason I was compelled to read this from beginning to end, and then reverse from the end to the beginning. The choice of words in this hook the reader so well. Short yes, but sweet. And done with skill and vivid imagery.

    • Beautifully penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! This a magnificent little write here my friend. I mean I really dig the wordplay and imagery. Next level good. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • This one had a lot to say with just a few words. I just went with what I felt. Thank you, my friend 😊

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