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Crimsin wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

entranced

Poetry, Romance

April 18, 2025

10

The vibe you put out is entrancingRomancing the notion of weThere is no us to speak ofYet your energy says there could bea deep intellectI rest in the layered shadows of your creationand dream of what is thereTaking my...

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9 Comments
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Lovely Brenda…Perfect piece of exquisite romance. xo
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Keith I appreciate you 💕
- Crimsin
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  thank you most graciously lovely poetess 💕
- Average Joe
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  A harmless pass time or a dangerous thing to dream in the thoughts and words of another? Nice capture, Brenda. 🌼
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    hello dearest Joe I think it depends on who you are mine is in the moment daydreaming thank you for your thoughts 💕
- Nick DC
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  That aching want. I know it well. Wonderful ink, friend.
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    thank you dearest DC I appreciate you 💕
- RPM
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Great piece!
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    thank you graciously RPM 🙂
Thomas W. Case wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Undo the Darkness

Poetry

April 18, 2025

17

Tonight, I lie in bed andscribble in a black spiralnotebook.Why is cruelty easy forsome? Like lying downa card.One of my three cats,Mojosits sleepily onmy old maple desk.She is all black.The computer screen isblack.So are the speakers,microphone,and a coffee cup...

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14 Comments
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Damn. How do I edit? It’s Undo the Darkness.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Go to Dashboard. Click on the blue pen and then edit.
    - Thomas W. Case
      1 year, 2 months ago
      
      ty
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Terrific imagery, and flow. A great read my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Thomas W. Case
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you.
- S. Libellule
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Vivid… well done
  - Thomas W. Case
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    I apreciate it.
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  This is a magnificent poem. Well done Thomas.
  - Thomas W. Case
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you.
- Daniel Long
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Wonderful Thomas. Your work is an example to all of us here! Bravo!
  - Thomas W. Case
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you so much.
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks. I appreciate it.
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Much appreciated.
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks, Adira
Thomas W. Case wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Standing Eight Count

Poetry

April 18, 2025

8

I was starving inPennsylvania.One night, I hadenough.Done with it all.The poverty andsickness.The drunken madnightsand dog-fight days.Brutality for breakfast.Served sunny side uprunny yolks withbutterflies trapped inthe yellow sunshine.Spiders built webs inmy soul.I stood on the torn-upcouch in my living room...

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7 Comments
- Crimsin
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  hello dearet Thomas I’ve had my share of war with him one particular night I anointed my whole house and yard with olive oil I felt so under attack it was relentless I feel for your struggle in this write and have been there great write 💕
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thank you, Brenda. I appreciate it.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Thomas. Stellar imagery, and a fabulous read. I could picture the scene. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks, my friend.
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  What a poem. Damn! In your face. Love it!
  - Thomas W. Case
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you so much.
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  I appreciate that. Thank you.
Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Would You?

Poetry

April 17, 2025

10

Would you take my handTake a chanceTo fall inLoveWould you spend a momentTo consider thatI may beYoursWould this be your only chanceTo have whatWas meantEternally

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10 Comments
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  In a heartbeat…
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Peter
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Fia. Seductive read my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Damian.
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Beautiful work.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Thomas;))
- Nick DC
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Have to take leaps to get that loving devotion. Wonderful ink, friend.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you Nick😊
- Daniel Long
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  What a lovely offer within the stanzas of this poem. Everlasting love. Romance poems are the best poems! Especially when there’s a sense of longing for someone who isn’t yours yet. Sweet write, Fia, as always.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you , Daniel 😊
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• 1 year, 2 months ago

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