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Read MoreI never said being with me was easy Assumptions turned you down the wrong path Where are you going? It better not be away from me Didn’t you say I was the only one who made you feel I taught you things no one...
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You do? I love to watch what is mine… play. But. Everyone has a limit. ;)) Thank you M.E
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Great spill my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian ;))
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“Baby, you drank so much of me
I am seeping out of your pores”What an amazing couplet this is. Wow. Every single line of this piece stands alone as so significant.
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Thank you, Dk. I wanted to show how jealousy can be over whleming.;))
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Great write. Jealousy can be a two way street. When two people are in love and there both the jealous type, that can be quite toxic.
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It can be very toxic. Agreed. ;))
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damn good write
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Thank you, Ambjr
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Superb writing.
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Thank you, Thomas;))
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Thomas W. Case wrote a new post
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Read MoreI love it whileit sleeps--smiling,wet with tea;dreaming dormouse dreams.I tickle its downy fur.And it laughs andmoans softly.I want to put it inmy pocket andcarry it everywhere;take it out onlonely autumn nights andplay with her untilshe's exhausted,relaxed and rested,content and...
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Subtle. YES. Erotic. YES. Have something to do with a dormouse. Maybe. 😉
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lol. Thanks.
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Oh, this is exactly how I take a bath at the end of every day!
And then the children rush in, dumping mice in the tub!
If it were not for your pic, I would have had a completely different take on this rodent epic – but you do have a way of putting a twist in every rat’s tale-
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Lol. Thank you so much. You get it.
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Lost in your fingers. Erotic is the word. Very good
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yes. Thank you.
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Soft-porn erotica at it’s finest. Nice work here.
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yes. lol. Thank you.
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Beautifully penned, Thomas. Into the book it belongs! Nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you.
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Thank you. The dormouse is a symbol for something else. lol
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lol
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreYou glide your thumb across my lips My tongue darts out to taste Both of us aware of our own thirst For the other Leaning in close as if pulled Breathing in each other breaths Time is slow and absurdly fast My head tilts to a...
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You are HOT as shit, just like always… and I’m all about Tequila.
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Hmm Damp Kitten and tequila. Tasty. Thank you ❤️
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Now I am drunk on these lines!
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The lines… or…? lol
Thank you, M.E
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E..ve..ry..th..ing!
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Well, that is tempting. ;))
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Intoxicating write, Fia. The room always gets hot when you spill, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Need some heat over here.;))
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very hot
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Thank you, Ambjr;))
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Sappho (Elke) wrote a new post
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Read MoreMy face - a mirror of a life that's been lived Thoughtfulness crinkled my skin Laughter lines tell stories of shared joy Deep reflections carved a crease on my forehead My mind - both healer and weapon Marcyless I speak words that can kill My...
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Beautifully penned, Sappho. This an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I truly believe that you mean every word…
There’s something soothing, honest and enlivening in the way you write Elke.
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Greetings, Sappho (Elke) 🌿
It’s just Richard, dropping-in to say hello and partake of this eloquently laid Free Verse piece that has virtually soared my senses through the effulgent beauty of your poetic voice.
Your title caught my eye right-off, drawing me in to be greeted by your uniquely impacting art choice, leading down into the magical depths of words, lines, and fluently flowing lines that simply left me spellbound.
Within the musical timbre of your wondrous words dances the perfect spirit of an enthralling woman’s heart and soul … not the hallmark of a novice’s pen, but of one who’s lived ‘n done “that” to fullest measure, literally or through the magic of creative imagination … either way, I’m smitten!
Sappho’s “Ode to Aphrodite” is a Free Verse piece I read as a young lad, and your use of her name has mystified my manly maturity, let’s say.
Elke, I thank you ever-so warmly and gratefully for sharing You.
Namasté, Dear Poetess 🙏 ⁓ Richard🖌Psst!
(V2-L2, Marcyless = Merciless) 🤓
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Drieks and
Sappho (Elke) are now friends
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You didn’t strike me as a jealousy type. But I like surprises! “)