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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreI could never play the pianoThere are too many keysAs my fingers touch I tremble feeling ill at ease“Focus you can do this”I tell my soulBut the teachers disheartening eyesGrips me and wont let goWhen she leavesThe tears begin to...
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Thank you, crimsin;))
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I played piano for years but got bored with it being I had no band to play with. Your words here show a timid and shy player developing into a professional with music in their soul. Music moves people. It should be learned by everyone.
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I agree with you. Sometimes when you do not have the right teacher, it would put a person off from even trying to learn to play. Thank you, Tim
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Great write. Emotionally driven. Well done!
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Thank you, Keith 😊
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! You know I love writes that involve music my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian ☺️
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I always envied people who could play the piano. I had a friend who played classical by memory & it blew my mind. I only ever had voice. Lovely walk through the keys here
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Thank you, Willow ;))
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This is a very unique vibe, Fia. I like it a lot.
Much respect
Naaj
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Thank you, Naaj;))
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The piano is a beautiful instrument. It has the power to move people to joy and tears.
I enjoyed this poem.
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Thank you, Knight;))
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The last line made me smile. Guitar is my instrument, but I know how overwhelming it can be to learn an instrument. Playing one a little might not be too hard, but playing it well is far, far harder. Nice work, my friend.
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Thank you, Sam ;))
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Crimsin wrote a new post
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Read Moresadness day I often cry insidebeautiful understanding it is neededto know happinessugly thinking utopiaif it exisits I don't want to go therewhat a strange existence, so very blandrollercoast life with its twists and turnsup and downs thrills mecorrupt a...
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Fantastic!
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hello dearest Adagio thank you graciously have a great afternoon 💕
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I appreciate you deeply 💕
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A gorgeous piece. You’re a talent Brenda!! xxxxo
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hello dearest Keith good evening thank you graciously for the love it’s felt 💕
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Read Moresadness quiet and stillmy happiness is in youwaking me earlyand genty waiting on me to answer your silent hellomy Father who leads mewho teaches me your magicwho leaves me hints of knowledgeto lead me onwardyou give me understandingsorrow a...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. This was an amazing write my write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian it’s always hard for me to share my faith because in day passed people let me down but when I really look back I realize our creator didn’t…he is more than fair with me I should be dead already with my careless behavior early in life I am grateful for life even the sorrow… thank you for being here 💕
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“the herd mentality for us is obscene” love this line. Great piece
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hello beautiful Fia thank you the idea we should conform to a stat pattern is ludacris I’m happy this spoke to you 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good evening thank you graciously my friend 💕
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Thomas W. Case wrote a new post
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Read MoreWe lived for thenext drink; the elixir toerase the memories ofa thousand cruel dawns.It took work when wewere broken and bedraggled.Creativity and thirst droveus through the day."Do you have anything to pawn?""Hey, why don't we stop by theold carnival...
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Aww, to have that smell linger in your mind. Good write
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Thank you.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. Being an alcoholic has levels and rabbit holes, only problem is trying to navigate through the quicksand that one is slowly sinking in. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks, my friend.
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I never had a desire to drink but my mother did. I guess some people are prone to addictions then others. This is a gritty down and out poem, but always interesting when coming from your pen, Thomas.
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Real, raw, treacherous, daring. Awesome!! Love this piece!
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I appreciate you.
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Thank you, Tim.
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Thank heaven for that marriage between the sun and that trash .. Write on brother .. Neville 😎👍
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Thanks, my friend.
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hello beautiful Fia this was so beautifully moving my eyes teared 💕