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Read MoreIn the weight of the dark Unseen hounds bark Boots a heavy thunder Streets torn asunder Beating on the night Alleys with no light Eyeballs record Pig Dogs getting bored Rough grasping hands Round the tender glands Felt from head to heel Out comes the steel Claws around the wrist He didn't...
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Yes I agree.
It’s better on the page than hurting yourself or others.
Regards James
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Read Morein the mediocre light I find myselfnothing stellar to speak ofdarkness gloom, I desire something specialto entertain divinitywithout losing my mind to the abysswhere oft times I wandermy soul adrifttouching on the etherealmy visions mine to keeppassion plays and...
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Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Amazing dark write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian 💕
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The light only blinds and befuddles us, while darkness softly and thoroughly embraces our truth, regardless. There is indeed something special about nothingness -the void- where everything and nothing is possible.
Superb write, my friend!
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hello dearest poet thank you most graciously good afternoon 💕
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hello Mary thank you graciously lovely one 💕
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Read Morea predisposition for depression swaymy feelings follow, and I was waylaidsuccumbing to the malady, I achesinister understanding, it would not alleviatethe darkness cloying devastateAnd in my compromised position, I vownot to placate people anymorethen swallow down my emotionsbecoming sorrowful...
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I suffered from it when I was younger for various reasons. Your poem spotlights it in an artistic way. Excellent poem crimsin.
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hello dearest Tim I understand I suffer from it out of loneliness I can make friends I can’t keep them thank you for the lovely comment 💕
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U got me forever like it or not 😝😜🤪
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Powerful work. Tremendous.
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good evening dearest Thomas thank you graciously 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. I have had problems keeping friends as well, I can totally relate. Superb write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest damian I think my problem lies in the inability to properly set boundaries and when I finally stand up for myself it’s with anger and people are taken aback I think if I set consistent boundaries from the start it woud be better my problem is I see good in everybody thank you for understanding 💕
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Hello Brenda. Magnificent piece of writing here. So many suffer with loneliness and depression. It’s not a good feeling at all. Stellar work my friend. xo
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hello dearest Keith good morning thank you graciously I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
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hello beautiful Mary I was watching Wednesday today on Netflix when this poem came to mind I’m happy you liked it I deeply cherish your thoughts 💕
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I love Wednesday!! Thoroughly enjoyed this gothic write:).
There is only one reason to unsheathe a sword! To bring the carnage!-
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hello beautiful Adelphina ahh yes carnage I guess in this write I was going for a willing sacrifice but carnage there would be lol I love your comment thank you and p,s. I love Wednesday too I feel like I was born in the wrong family sometimes 💕
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Brilliantly penned, Brenda. This is an incredible dark write my friend, excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreVicious eyes,ferocious smile, and anass that begged to berubbed all night, likeBuddha promises good luck.But what thatass brought, wasjail, soup lines, andhomeless shelters.The heart pounds thehead, then the feet poundthe street;walking mile after mile,aimless roaming,doe eyed thinkingWhat went wrong?Where...
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Those assess have been known to stir up a lot of trouble. Sadly, I must stay away from them. 🙂
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lol. Thanks, Tim.
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hello dearest Thomas it this saying her ass got you in trouble? in any case it’s a hell of a story 💕
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yes. lol. Thank you.
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Yeah, a nice-looking ass will lead you down the wrong road. lol nicely done
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lol. Thanks.
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I could eat my meals of a nice ass.
Great write and very true about the power of a nice derriere.
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Thank you. I appreciate it.
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Thank you so much.
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Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Into the book it belongs! Words of wisdom my friend, an exceptional write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, my friend.
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lol. Thank you, my friend.
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Thanks for reading.
I am full of anger sometimes.
It’s good to write it down.
Regards James