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Crimsin wrote a new post
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thank you dearest Jim this is from my imagination I wouldn’t aspire to do as such just the way I’m feeling right now thank you ❤️
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really I just write whatever comes to mind so I don’t stifle my muse then there is my bipolar too to consider… so sometimes what I write is kooky lol ❤️
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PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos) wrote a new post
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. Digging this new format and style my friend. Excellent work as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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twofiftythree posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
hopin to receive partial credit for late assignments…
swore under oath
rationality
face down hands cuffed to my tongue
heart screams alibi-
Love it, Dru

Excellent, in every sense of the word: counts, directives, and intent in following in the spirit that one of the truly tangible facets of what the Senryu is meant to convey.
For me, your Senryu literally strives to express needed fervor for acceptance and the strife to be trusted and believed-in, even though the opposite may appear…Read More
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Sappho (Elke) wrote a new post
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@visions of Insanity
Also on behalf of Sappho, I would like to thank you for listening.
The lyrics are about something we both care deeply about. And she was the one to write this inspiring poem. And artwork of course.Thank you so much for your very fine compliments. They go a long way!
Kind regards, Sappho and Gus
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Powerful penned, Elke and Gus. Excellent collaboration you two. Great lyrics, Elke and excellent music, Gus. Your guitar tone has a little Neil Young vibe going on. Top notch both of you. Appreciate you, both.
Damian
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I bow most reverently to Sappho ‘n Gus 🙏
Stunningly beautiful, You Two, in every sense of the word.
Artwork choice, title, and the Envelope Form in its abba rhyme-scheme (with spot-on and soft rhymes), work perfectly together, just as writing and musical skills came together in rendering this lovely, impacting virtual masterpiece in homage to Mother Earth’s ever dwindling beauty and life sustaining wonders.Simply, an enthralling co-write … love it deeply!
Thank you both! ⁓ Richard🖌Nits:
(Check V1-L3, “get” may have been meant as “yet”. Final stanza, L1, should “plead” be “plea”?) 🤓-
I bow with gratitude to you, dear Richard! A breathtaking comment and the appreciation of a writer like you means a world to me!
I have gratefully implemented your kind suggestions for improvement. As English is not my mother tongue I appreciate this all the more! 🙏
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I’ve written a few from this vein myself and no doubt we’ll write many more, trying to get people to pay attention. The both of you did an amazing job on this. 🙌
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“…blow your heart to bits” genius work dear. 😉