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Read MoreYour rocket flew.And the dark space around you anew.Everywhere around you,bright shiny stars. Real,not locked up behind bars.It's like they twinkled in the dark sky.With shiny,bright moonlight. Are you glowing,dark starlight?As you flew and explore.You felt sad no more. For the view...
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Read MoreI don't need whipped cream or frosting to make me sweet.Neither on my cookies.Or to make my life sweet.It's too much sugar for me.A prince charming just isn't the one I need.I want a gingerbread man,the one I'll feed.A...
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This Gingerbread man is sweet and sour. I love it yet it makes me sad for a bit. And a glimpse of hope. A glimpse of hope doesn’t hurt.
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I’ve always found gingerbread to be more spicy than other cookies. I’m not about the super sweet myself. I need the pice. Loved this!
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Very creative. Excellent work.
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Phenomenally penned, Liz. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreComes now my midnight lover’s callthat softly echoes down the hall.I pull the sheets and lift my head,then slowly saunter out of bedso careful not to wake your sleepwith all the secrets that I keep.He meets me at the...
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If only life was like that…lol
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And death, for that matter.
But yeah, I know what you mean, Peter!xoxo
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Powerful fucking poem. Great work.
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I’m so glad you think so, Thomas! Thank you!
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I think I’d be in sin every part of the day.. if the night started like this! LOL Great poem!!
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Thank you so much, Christoper! I’m so glad you liked it.
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Awesome poem Kitten. You sure know know to heat up a page.
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I’m so glad you think so, Kenn! Thanks for reading my stuff!
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Whew!!! Intense indeed
Very well written.Naaj
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Thank you, Naaj! Thanks for reading!
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“GULP!” 😳
Well, Dear Poetess,
So much for the site’s pornagrophy rules … LOL!I’m not so sure it’s all a sin
because done over and again,
there’s a beauty in every stroke
of throaty moans sooo softly spoke.“You hesitate, but in the end,
I smother you in evening sin.
By midnight moon, you drown content
between my legs as I repent.” (there’s nothin’ better’n making-up)Not a lot of metaphor, but loads of excellent imagery, giddy flow, smoothly laid syntax, succulent stimulation, consistent 8-count meter, spot-on rhyme scheme ‘n art choice, and presentation appeal.
It’s more than a little obvious this is definitely not your first poetry rodeo … masterfully done, Lady-Poet.Now, excuse me, please, while I dip my head in a bucket of ice! ⁓ Rascal🖌
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Wow! Wow! Wow!
What a review, Rascal, and thank you for that! I’m honored. I think you covered everything from mechanical technique to emotional effect. Wait… there are rules on this site? Shit. Let me look that up. Hold up, someone’s at the door carrying fuzzy handcuffs – and they’re not in uniform. Let me take a rain check on that.Rascal, this review is amazing. I’m giddy. Thank you!
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Mmmm!
Something must have inspired me … can’t imagine what it was? ; p-
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I hope you can figure it out…
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Beautifully penned, Liz. Fantastic flow my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian