Brilliant work.

You’ve surprised me with this one.

Very very good💋

You are so versatile in your writing. Love it Dk.

I think this poem can be interpreted in different ways. It can the literal death or the symbolic death as in writer’s block. And you have spoken of that beautifully! Well done “)

I’m so glad, Mr. Dragon! Ironically, I was just on DUP and had a note from administration that they wanted to include this poem in the DUP Anthology under dark poetry. I happily gave them permission.

xoxo

You should go over there and offer some of your poems. They were all amazing. I’m thinking they have waited a little late to start collecting pieces for this anthology. Lots of people have already closed their accounts.

Sorry… I’m not going to comment on this… I have to take a shower

Wait, don’t you need to wash your underwear?

Well, I could write some nasty words where you could feel them…

If that picture is your outside… then please kill me with you

Thanks! Being inside oneself too much is crushing too.

Pink, being outside is the best medicine. Your poem is so vivid with the pining of the outside written in lines that have incredible clarity and convey your feelings perfectly. Enjoyed reading this tonight.

John

We don’t…if you dissect our minds the only word you’ll ever find is “sex”

Brilliantly penned, Sam. A great read my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerful work. You bring this to live. Excellent.

Such a cute story, Sam. I should think you look completely at ease leaning over a desk with your pants around your ankles. Which reminds me how much I like your apples. You know, there’s this snake in the bush that keeps whispering I need to take a bite.

Dk is would love to see you take that bite.
Nice poem Sam

OMG… I’m having my ass smacked and you are having FUN ?!?!?… what a friend !!!!!