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Willow posted in the group National Poetry Month
he knows the sound of my breath
as it catches
hovering over his words
like a hummingbird
imbibing
on the intoxicating nectar
of his expression4 Comments-
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Truly 😊
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Beautiful: short, simple, and beautiful. HJx
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Thank you 😊
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Willow wrote a new post
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Read Morehe knows the sound of my breath as it catches hovering over his words like a hummingbird imbibing on the intoxicating nectar of his expression
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This tells the reader what you mean but with finesse. Love it
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Thank you 😊 It was stupid o’clock in the morning so it’s short, but it says what’s important to me
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For some reason I was compelled to read this from beginning to end, and then reverse from the end to the beginning. The choice of words in this hook the reader so well. Short yes, but sweet. And done with skill and vivid imagery.
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Thank you so much 😊
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Beautifully penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! This a magnificent little write here my friend. I mean I really dig the wordplay and imagery. Next level good. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This one had a lot to say with just a few words. I just went with what I felt. Thank you, my friend 😊
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Read MoreOne more reason to give up on God and the Marilyn Monroe tattoo upon her thigh would peel from her skin...laughing Begging for mercy horror’caust and what price desire when her purse is empty? So far, so fast, so fierce singing ‘auf wiedersehen’ to the last of the international Berlin...
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The man of her dreams is sad and alone because of his drug addiction. Choices one makes…right.
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Dear R,
This for me, makes me think of all the relationships that want desperately to succeed but are doomed from the start. Especially the ones fueled by addiction. The edgy gritty feel throughout this write is relatable for anyone trapped inside this carousel nightmare. I like the dark fast pace of this write. H 🌷
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Powerfully penned, Ghosteen. Another excellent write with amazing storytelling my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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