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    dear beauty

    dear beauty please bestow on me your essenceso I will glow with the feelinga lovely fountain springs eternal in mesuch succinct endeavor, to garner your favormy thoughts dance on the mistsan ethereal lass before meconjuring my immortal lustswith a...

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    forever

    speaks the night of breath and formcold we turn to stonein our dire hour left aloneno one to atone but ourselvesby this sigh I speakof lost days and full onesmaudlim and melancholy I roamsinister faith, teaches us to hopehonest...

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  • Means

    Biden calls it values.The missile is indifferent.The end justifies the means. Trump calls it winning.Facts are negotiable.The end justifies the means. Putin calls it history.Graves are future tense.The end justifies the means. Xi calls it harmony.Silence is compliance.The end justifies the means. Netanyahu...

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    • Very good. I just read that Musk said that death is faulty design and in the future we will figure out how to fix it.

    • Thanks Fia.
      Don’t normally agree with Elon but he is right that death will be eventually defeated by science but probably only for the rich.
      You wouldn’t want the poor living forever now ..would you.
      Seriously,who really wants to live forever..not me.
      💋

    • Cleverly penned, Peter. Powerful write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    The Terror in the Community

    The Terror In The Community. The community was designed as a euphoric cornucopia of green, lush plant life, all underwater in a 25-gallon tank. Introducing into this tank were three. You heard me, three fanciful goldfish. One was an Oranda that...

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    • Cleverly penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend, I always enjoy your amazing storytelling. Appreciate you, cuz.

      Damian

    • Fantastic. Love it, Fia.

    • Why not just flush Maurice?? Get rid of the non team player! maybe he can go rule the sewers or something, LOL.
      I’m just being logical! Or put his ass with a male Beta (Japanese Fighting fish). No more Maurice!

    • Chère F.,
      I’d love it if this would find you mellow and at ease, just before the weekend.

      I’ve read your poem and I don’t understand it.
      blunt Dutch analysis.
      But I love the kiss by Brancusi (singer museum Leiden the Netherlands) without understanding too.
      I love some of Rothko’s work too.

      Understanding isn’t always about what you/I can grasp at any time!
      I love this write of yours and I think it’s raking me a little more time.

      So:
      Please be patient with me!
      I’ll be back, I promise! Have a very nice weekend…..
      Warm Waving from a distance, Gus

    • Cook Maurice and have him as an appetizer. He’d be with you forever. Great story Fia.

    • This starts playful but slowly tightens into something darker.
      Power and cruelty don’t need much space to show themselves.

    • Clean slate works also. Lol

    • I think you’ll need to build a little underwater jail and keep Maurice there as punishment.
      This was great, yes it’s frustrating that your fishes kept dying but I love how you told this story not just as the observer but almost like a deity that you had power but they kept dying on you while you weren’t looking.
      Awesome work.

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