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Read MoreEntering this adventure This complicated maze I'll never surrender I'm finding a way To overcome these obstacles I'm going to escape My plan is methodical And it's taking shape I know I'm in trouble With my mind's delirium Rotating in this tunnel Disorienting me equilibrium Sliding floors shift In the tilting room Do...
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hello Mr. D beautiful understanding of yourself great write 💕
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Thank you for commenting..hope all is well with both of you
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Isn’t funny how time and events shape us but the eyes show everything. Nice poem
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Everything changes but the eyes remain.the window of the soul. Thanks for reading. Hopefully it brought an old memory or two. 🌼
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this is hauntingly beautiful I feel like I am not the same person at all and wonder where that person went great write 💕
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We’re ever changing, and yet, the inner child remains, the touchstone all else is measured by..I hope you’re doing better 🌼
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Dear AJ,
This makes me see sepia toned memories of my own childhood. Although we were carving these pictures into cave walls. There is definitely a gentle melancholy in this piece for innocence and more time. Lovely write. H🌷
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Thoughts of childhood bring nostalgia. Simpler times, no responsibilities – just you always blaming me for pulling your pony tail. As if such would ever cross.my innocent mind 🌼😋
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Read MoreHi, not sure what I'm doing up here but I think I can say a few words in front of all these stars because when I look out into the audience all I see is stars You’re a star you're a star and damn...
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hello beautiful Fia damn right you’re a star great write keep shining 💕
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You are one too. ;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! You’re already a star, and have been shining bright for a while now my friend. Congrats on 100. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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Read MoreMy crimson tongue runs up your petal tasting and licking the dew off you.Your wet tongue slithers into my mouth ...
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I love the cascading staircase set up. Well, well I like the belt being pulled off to be wrapped around your throat. Hmm delightful.
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. A very intense write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I read this one twice. It does describe a fun house of life. With life being tilted and the choice to turn the other cheek. Interesting.