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    Fia Naturie wrote a new post

    Why I walk in the Rain

    I walk in the rain so my tears can blendBut these tears don't blendThey scream in pain with every red drop    I walk in the rain to cool off my skinYou can see the steam rise as every drop hitsAnd...

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    • That’s really very good Fia.
      I used to swim a lot so others couldn’t see my tears.
      🙏

    • Beautifully penned, Fia. This is an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • I wonder, Dear Fia 🤔

      How many poems of unrequited or flown love have been written by brokenhearted pens? One might as well attempt to count all the stars above. Thankfully, fresh love always comes along to dance into our ever-hopeful hearts and dreams.

      Once again, your amazing knack of turning words into deepest feelings of emotional experiences, lure us into your intricately-woven poetic tapestry.

      This one will hold-on for a long time … its touch I’ve known all too well to forget.
      Thank you, Lady Fia, ever-so warmly! ⁓ Richard 🍂

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    She Pinched Each Candleflame One By One

    It was slow, agonizingly slow!When every candleflame that showshow you pulse with spirit and life,is pinched out by the very fingersof someone who once loved you! Love lost brought a cold, dark wick. Some smoke still sputters in defiance!Could that...

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    • Powerfully penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • I missed this one, Daniel. You express yourself so well.
      I’ve been there. Yes, I write about love, but the fact is that I’ve hardened my heart so no one can hurt me.

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    Boring

    Am I the world's most boring man..?My shadow has left out of boredom.Time yawns when I enter a room.Rivers flow uphill to avoid me,and plants fake their own demise.Am I the worlds most boring man..?I rot without the courtesy...

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    • It doesn’t sound content; it sounds more like you’re resigned to it. I don’t think you’re boring.

      • Thanks Fia.
        I don’t think I’m boring but others would because I shun the endless stimulation that they need to feel alive.

    • You’re anything but boring. You know that. I understand what you meant in your comment to Fia. I shun that endless stimulation too. I don’t need it.
      I enjoy your writing.

      • Thanks Alexandria…

        It’s quite a hard gig standing your ground these days.If you don’t play the game you get called antisocial or the fun police or a killjoy.Small price to pay for being interesting…😘

    • at least you are content to be yourself I go to lengths just to get away from self part of me drives me crazy 💕I think I might be split personality I can hear internal voices that drive me mad sometimes….

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    Smokescreen

    Wild beasts surround a lonely soul Corrupting them with broken promises  What they offer makes nothing whole The world filled with doubting Thomas’s   Low hanging fruit another money grab Indoctrinated into this hateful machine  It takes footwork to slip their subtle jab Critical thinking reveals a...

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    • I like this, Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Very powerful write, Damian. Rage against the machine!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Exactly.. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • They surround and attack like piranhas. This is a good piece

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That they do. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I will continue to say those who believe the lies do so for their own corrupt reasons. Which begs the question…who is worse? The chief liars or those who choose to believe because it suits their agendas? I’ve lost friends & family to this current state of the world. Eyes wide open, mind wider. It’s the only way to make it through. Another solid write, my friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s truly a cult in my opinion, when no matter how much truth is revealed, they continue to follow. I don’t think most wanna see, or they actually like what the world is becoming. That’s how I see it, always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Dope…deep…thought provoking.
      As always…you deliver, bro

      Much respect

      Naaj

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Naaj. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Means a lot to me, brother. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Raven. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    Backdeckbenny (Peter) wrote a new post

    Sigmund was right.

    I just love it Love the sight of it. Love the feel of it. Love the taste of it. Love the smell of it. Love the sound that it makes. I just love it.          

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