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Read MoreWithin the tempest of this world, my candle flame burns stout and proud. Storm clouds gather over my candlelit eyes, yet they burn on… a powerful counter-gaze through that grey overcast blanketing what was once the warm sun in my life....
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Anxiety is such a beast. Like the snake trying to swallow its own tail. Very solid piece here
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Our minds can take us on a wild ride and it’s out decision to do so. The unknown will often intrude and fall on us like rain. It’s the not knowing of something and fearing the outcome that gets us.
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Thanks for the comment Tim
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Oothat SOB can be a soul snatcher!.
I know and feel you deeply, sigh. ❤️
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Read MoreThis ocean breathes… Your rhythm of the sea! Waves rising and falling like our chests do when we breathe. You are lost somewhere deep… Deep within my heart… You're the one who tickles my heartstrings. And from within you sing your rhythm of the sea.
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hello dearest Daniel good evening this is beautiful I love the ocean 💕the ebb and tide so much like love…
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Beautifully penned, Can almost feel the waves in the flow my friend. Amazing write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello lovely Fia a very fiery passion powerful 💕
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Thank you crimsin ❣️
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![Profile picture of Willow]()
Oh damn…
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Thank you, Willow❣️
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Passionately penned, Fia. This write is fire my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian I need to get this fire started somehow. Lol
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I do this to women …
Then they burn for me
Wait
Listen
I may be at your door ….-
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Ohh, waiting.
Big like
Thank you PoetSpeak ❣️
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The flames of that passionate fire are rising high in this one, Fia. Nice one.
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Thank you, Tim had to bring a little fire❣️
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Do you see me leaning in? This poem has made me a voyeur. Very nice, Fia, love it.
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Thank you Kay-1😊
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Read MoreReading the room reveals a clue It takes concentration to observe Ghosts of the past in the rearview Another deadman found his nerve Once inside it’s difficult to leave Too many loose ends unravel lies Can’t get dirty and remain naive Tactical spider still collecting flies Planting...
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I think about the consequences of opening my mouth & weigh them against the burden of saying nothing. If it has the potential to hurt someone, I keep it locked in the Nope folder. There’s a lot of insight in this one. That cautionary note…think before you speak…is never out of date, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I always try to think before I speak. Sometimes that means biting my tongue, I like to choose the hills I’m willing to die on. Always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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No you can not stay naive. Especially when you already was a part of it.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Exactly, also can’t play the victim when found at the scene of the crime. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian you are very deep… I’ve picked up on a lot of wisdom in you… the air can help but be heavy with the words… truth is just like that 💕well done…
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you, that means a lot to me, such a wonderful compliment. It’s really just being true to how my brain is wired. I’m a deep thinker who likes puzzles. lol. Your support has meant a lot as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Learning to “read the room” is such a great line, and your last is filled with wisdom. We live and we learn as we go learning from our past mistakes and learning from others.
Great poem.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It was a cool line. Wisdom is gained over time, I totally agree. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian