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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
Reach out
There are things I wanted to show
There are things I could not let go
When my light is finally out
I’m in the shadowReach out , reach out
You’re in my heart
Reach out
Whenever you feel you’re falling apart
Reach out
I will always be there for you….I’m here for you
You’re never alone, its true
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oh beautiful Fia I can feel your giving heart here so lovely ❤️
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Thank you Crimsin<3
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Pure compassion here
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Thank you Willow.🧡
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Perfect! You going to do vocals for it?? Do it!
This is a catchy, lovable song! I love it! You did great!-
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Haha, no I have not sang in years. Thank you Styxian😊
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This is catchy and I loved how you ended it.
Being a home for love is such a lovely thought:)
Singing about it is even better!-
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Thank you Adel.😊
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Ana 1 ana 2 ana 3 ana 4 Wooooo yeah There are things I wanted to show
so I took off my clothes and then…..Well….anyway, not bad lyrics.
I’d love to hear a melody to it. Nice one Fia. 🙂-
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Thank you Tim😊
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent lyrics my friend. A lovely and compassionate write indeed. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian 😊 🧡
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This reminds me of those movies in the 80’s. they seemed to have that theme going through them.
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A dark one. I can picture someone standing at his grave. Suddenly they get dizzy and hear him speaking these words. As they snap out of it, they wonder if they were dreaming, or if it was real.
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Dude, nope. Not allowed.
I realize that this is creative writing. But it also leans me towards a bit of concern.
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hello Mr. D we all feel like that sometimes I hope this finds you well and depression has lossened its grip ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Mstrmnd. Depression is a powerful beast that twists and distorts everything around us, I speak from experience of course. The important thing is to always look towards the light, if you’re climbing towards that light, eventually you get out of the hole. That’s my best advice. It’s not easy but worth it. Best wishes my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you all for commenting..it’s just creative writing..I’m in a writing void so going back to my bread and butter and writing about death
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Read MoreInsanity is the hypotenuse of one's mind a right angle of reason splayed too widethe ghost of Pythagoras a catcher in the rye measured by the tsunami in the cerebellumwhen the rain falls mainly on the plainssipping the laudadum...
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Hi,
Your lines so much logic and math words. Excellent English and rhythm flow.You are great, i don’t know poetry can be so good with technical words.
Jessy Jacob ❤️
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Thank you, much.
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This is brilliant, my friend. The collision of mathematical or physical terms and the vivid and figurative imagery with many references hauntingly points to the difficulties to explain the inexplicable.
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Thank you, Elke. As you know, I have an affection for the dark of my ink.
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I really like, it sounds like a song. To not give up or reminding someone that they aren’t alone but you are there. Nice write keep it up.