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    Prophecy Of The Gun

    it was the immaculate conception inconceivable as it was me being birthed from the womb of man's ideology...motherless never nurtured from the essence of her femininity an umbilical cord just a figment of my sentimental imagination i arrive as a prophet in my own right and though i...

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    • Hahaha, the transition from the giver of life to the taker, from the peacemaker to the shit starter. The power of making a coward a brave individual, with the right plan a beggar could live comfortably. We want to discuss this with you soon, tight

      • Yep. This is how it is. Cowards becoming bullies though access to firearms.
        Conflict resolution takes on a different meaning. Big thx or the commentary, bro

        Much respect

        Naaj

    • Brilliantly penned, Naaj. This is a powerful write my friend, I dig the layers and incredible storytelling brother. This is next level good, much respect sir. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Glad you dug the layers, bro. This is an ongoing conversation in my head
        that I tried to unpack without rambling.

        Big thx and much respect

        Naaj

    • I would have never imagined thinking of a firearm this way. I love the way you kept writing it in a verse of the testament as if you scribing it into the book

      • Fia, the way you read was the way it lowed and yes…there is a book in my mind in regard to this topic [gun violence]
        I’m glad you enjoyed chapter one

        Much respect

        Naaj

    • Incredible write. Totally captivating for the reader. It is bold but not violent. It simply speaks of the potential for…
      This is a great write, Naajir. Very thick with detail and circumstance. Awesome.

    • Man, I hate guns! Loud popping sounds in general trigger me a bit. I remember a time when we fought with bats, bricks, and small knives. Some were good with their fists. My main criticism about self-defense with a gun is that some idiot will pull that sucker in a panic and shoot himself or some bystander. A lotta folks don’t even consider that. There was a time when only specialized warriors held that kind of fear & respect. Now any ol’ fool can be a serious danger. The Devil’s world in a nutshell. Great topic!

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    666 and ah Crucifix

    sick and tired of the masses being such idiots give me a canister and a light burn this town to the mother fucking ground yeah, if they want a fight we can fight fuck the police when they resort to violence killing our brothers and...

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    Fia Naturie posted in the group Music is Art

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    I wanted to post two versions of the same song to show, even if the music changes it is still a powerful write

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    We Delve

    Falling onto the softest cloud As a gentle whisp of air glides over my skin The deepest depth of color I sink into Not wanting to surface     Gentling of a night of intimacy Not rushed but urgent all the same Exchanges of audible sounds Heralding the...

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    • We had to change our original comment in recognition of your ability to say bodies slapping in an acceptable way. Hahaha, on the for real Lady we love it, it makes us think of slow love. Tight

    • This drifts between tenderness and urgent intensity, capturing the physical and emotional in a way that’s intimate without being flashy. I love how the language makes the body feel like both terrain and vessel, with every moment earned and alive.

      • Thank you so much. Its not easy to write subtitles and take a person on a journey. Its a skill. Lol

    • Passionately penned, Fia. Excellent write, you always deliver the goods my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.

      Damian

      • Thank you, cuz, I want to write more of these but being upfront with what you want is perfect too

    • Chère F.,
      You are being rather harsh on yourself, labelling this as 17. Or you are living in a different part of the world.

      This kind of love making I learned/learnt from another beautiful lady.
      I can only hope that I can get you to rub off on me the way to describe it the way you do.
      This is almost French by nature. You can get away with most everything, as long as you mind your language.

      Needless to say I love it to bits!
      Warm regards, Gus

      • Thank you, I called it We Delve not 17. lol Thank you for appreciating the subtlety of the poem.(almost French huh;))

    • hello beautiful Fia so deeoly passionate I have felt this in my lifetime ❤️sexy and powerful write…

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