Powerfully penned, HJ. Excellent storytelling with incredible dialogue my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks very much, Damian, I’ve always fancied myself as a bit of a science fiction freak on the QT (if you strip out the sex, BEINGS is really sci-fi), but my erotic tendencies have a habit of getting in the way! I tried Insurgent on my website – and didn’t get a single view, showing where lots of readers minds are straying to nowadays under the corrupt examples of the leaders, the powerful, the wealthy, and the paedophiles who holidayed in the most disgusting holiday resort in the world. I think they should all be rounded up, exposed, literally, to The Insurgent – IT metes out justice big time, like no other! Harriet-Jacqui xx

I like this. At a tangent, title reminds me of my fave minimalist poem (attributed to Hemingway). “For sale: baby shoes. Never worn.”

So much accomplished in so few lines. Like Rob said, minimalism is great for those who are precise with their thought. You are here.
Well done.

Thank you, Styxian.

Thank you, Elke.

With a few words you succeed and creating a hauntingly mysterious atmosphere. This is poetry writing at its best

oh this is good…

Thank you Sam

Powerfully penned, Adagio. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian