Very nice structure and flow, holly shitt ur good

This one bleeds ink and teeth—raw, unashamed of its own hunger and haunt.
You don’t pretty up the blues here; you bite down on them and grin through the bruise.

Thank you, Thomas.

Hi Atticus,
I’m with Thomas W. case. His comment being a poem in itself.

Yours is almost an abstract landscape of lust. Love it a lot.
Kind regards, Gus

Your poem shines in raw, haunting and intense beauty,. You’re a master of metaphors, my friend!

Thank you, Elke.

spurting, telling x

Thank you, Jacqui.