I loved the last line. It reads like a bang to my heart. A heart touching piece. Well done. “)

Beautifully penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Nice rhythm and cadence, it has an anthem feel. Incredible words my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerful work.

Absolutely Awesome! Wow!
The phrases I love… “Sinful Redemption” (A paradoxical escape from salvation)
“secreting the nights away” (A novel spin from noun to verb – clandestine and furtive)
“your truth my undoing” (The curse of understanding)

Just an amazing piece of work, girl.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Amazing piece Crimsin!
Razor sharp ink.

You’re crushing it, Brenda!!! Luvin it!!!!

Naaj

Tremendous work. Vivid and sharp.

Oh, the force is strong with this one.
C’mon and plug my Darth hole, Mr. Casket…

I’d love to give you a splash of sunshine

HOT AS ALWAYS!
xoxo

Thank you my dearest Adira! I keep on trying my best evrytime.

hello dearest Par this is very deep and must have been hard for you to face great write 💕

Wow, PAR! This is really good. I have to say I’ve never seen anyone self-analyze so meticulously as you’ve accomplished here in this series of pieces. For me, the word ‘violent’ in your poem may be slightly overbearing and excessive under the circumstance of your more extensive description. Perhaps ‘forceful’ or ‘foreboding’ … though I do see the intent to create shock through contrast.

You’ve managed to describe something that I’ve never paused to ponder… the power of silent observation, allowing the ribbons to unravel themselves until the package lies fully open and exposed. There’s a self-loathing quality to your piece, but it’s far deeper than that. It emulates the respect and honor provided by a student to his teacher.

Exceptionally intellectual and yet warmly appreciative. Well done.

Brilliantly penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! This is so profound with deep introspection my friend. Wow, you never fail to amaze me. Fucking magnificent write! Appreciate you.

Damian

hank you, Keith, for your words about my words… in a world that needs more and more significance. Appreciate you always.