hello dearest Thomas I feel this one deeply I used to climb a tree and dream this is beautiful here is a song making me happy tonight 💕

Beautifully penned, Thomas. Top notch write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Imagination is the absolute treasure! The places we can go, the journeys words take us on…priceless!

What a lovely story! Without imagination, we’re truly lost…
❤k

I love childhood tales–things we did when we were innocent. You reminded me that I had a box, too, though mine contained arrowheads and pretty rocks that I’d found.

Excellent. Thank you.

Beautiful work. Powerful.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. A very passionate write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

There is a great rush present in your style.
The intensity is held throughout.
I enjoyed the thoughts flowing through this.
Regards
James

hello dearest James a very beautifully succint poem I think we are on similar wavelengths today 💕

This felt so calm and balanced without having to use a lot of words to explain everything.

Nice work as usual🙏

I feel the sun and the moon with this. Very nice

Thanks for reading.
The sun and moon are always with us.
Regards James

How can there be one without the other? The unity in diversity is incredible. Beautifully written…

Did not know sharks are older than Saturn’s rings. Figures, they are rulers of their domain. This is an interesting piece like the underwater theme. I feel that you are bringing attention to the destruction of the oceans. At least that is what I am getting from this,

hello dearest poet I love the way you wove the rhythm with the words it sounded like an old pirate… sharks terrify me I have had nightmares of being lost at sea swimming among them but I guess I should fear the land sharks more great write 💕

The flow of this…pardon the pun…is amazing. There’s calm & destruction found in the depths of the ocean. Definitely will be returning to read this again