I can hear & feel this piece loud & clear. Great write.

Dark, sad. Great piece of poetry here.

Cool piece. Lighthouses are an imposing structure.
You can’t miss them unless you are in the trenches!
The way you put them blind to the eye is great.

Thanks for reading..trying to write about something different from my norm..a different level of thought invoking..thank you both for commenting

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend, really dig this one a lot. Appreciate you.

Damian

Lovely piece Brenda. The words are marvelously woven to create a delicate, fragile piece of poetry. xo

I wonder if that spider, doing what nature intended, ever said to himself – what a lovely day it is today?
Nice poem, crimsin.

Such a fine verse. I really needed that. TY & hugs+++