Seductively dark, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hoi hoi
If I am listening well, I hear confirming hums…
If I am seeing well, I see all thumbs up from the fan-club…

Who am I to disagree? Most likely I’m part of the fan club.
Kind regards, Gus

Awesome writing, dear Crimsin! Tender and seductive as well as haunting from the depth of the abyss!

Complexity of desire. It’s ever so. 🖤

I love it!! Wonderfully constructed and passionately HOT!!

Sweet descriptive piece with hints of longing

Hello John,

Your description here captures the atmosphere so perfectly. Your detail is always so razor sharp. Nice work.

Beautifully penned, John. Phenomenal imagery my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Your poem puts me in the mood of sailing and travel, the image of a sailor who is watching and expressing the scenes, keeping it in his head because soon it will only be a memory. There is sadness going along all the lines. Emotionally written.

Tremendous work. Powerful writing.

Inspiration can come from many places, but to be able to create something like this is exceptional, John. Great poem with creative images. 🙂

This was so perfectly executed that I can’t tell which is whose voice. Powerfully descriptive imagery,both of you 🙌

This is the best thing of yours that I ever read.
You should be congratulated.
Congratulations dear.

You are welcomed at least that much. 🙏🏼

“Jim is correct” I like the sound of that. But really, I appreciate that and the fact that you see the wonder of this poem tells me a lot about you too. 🙂 💚

😊 Thank you dear.

TY – too kind would imply harm of some kind, like killing you with it. I think you don’t mean that tho. I think you mean you like me. I like you as far as I can tell from here 😉

You mean out of my freakin’ mind hysterical or funny?

🙂
be well

The bees chasing the flowers over and over again. We are chasing something, but what is it?