Powerfully penned, PAR. Excellent write my friend. I can feel the pain in your words, haunted by a memory, wishing time would make you forget. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you my brother.

Damian

This is giving me sorrow and slight anger. Really good spill.

Awesome! This is the poem of the day to me. The frustration jerking the pen across the page, all helter skelter. The need to be stern and yet softened at the core.
Awesome!

That teddy bear really fit fits this piece, you touched on multiple, maybe stemming from abused children. Tight

Powerfully penned, Nick. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Is this a song because I am reading this as a song. This makes me think of what the person is observing in his life and how people interact with him.

“I don’t hate my family
I just don’t love them”

That’s so profound. Family isn’t the same thing to everyone. Honestly, the people who really raised us are the family…our friends, our mentors, our music. The rest is sometimes just DNA. I agree with Fia, this feels like lyrics to me

Mic Drop!

Boom. I agree with this whole heartedly.

I mean…damn! 🎤🙌

Nice write Wally

Beautifully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. The life of a writer is never boring. Appreciate you.

Damian

We are all here to share words; to offer through cyberspace an image, a scene, or an experience that can hopefully come alive in the readers mind.

If we have writings we are too shy to reveal to friends or relatives, there’s always a place waiting where we can share with likeminded souls, knowing we are always welcome. The door down the hall is always unlocked.

And when we’ve settled in, it’s as though we are sharing a piece of ourselves with confidence.

Awesome writing, Wally.

Really enjoyed this. You wrote what a home should be. Thank you.