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Read MoreI felt like lucky sevensWhen I bought my first houseMy little slice of heaven For me and my spouse A two car garageAnd a yard thats immense Filled with a floral collageBordering a white picket fenceAn American flag extendedFrom...
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Thank you as always for taking the time to read and for commenting
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Right now, I am in a massive dilemma myself with the ever increasing cost of add-ons to my mortgage. It has gone up 50% in just four years. This house is not worth what they charge me now. So, it may be time to go elsewhere sooner than expected.
Your write is obviously of a bigger picture, for all of us as a whole. The “dream” is being rocks through windows from so many directions. Peace of mind is scarce. Your frustration is loud, word by word.-
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Yeah..its absolutely frustrating.. nothing is affordable..my wife and I have focused on downsizing the past few years and cutting back the expenses where we can..but to your point u can’t cut back the mortgage or the rising utility bills or ins..and we are all drowning quickly..the rich are rapidly getting richer and there’s a huge gap between them and most of us..oir next step is to downsize our house.. but we are still months and months away from that as thats more complicated with moving and everything..but yes it feels like rocks through windows..sucks..thank you for commenting..and hopefully be there times ahead
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I feel your frustrations through this piece and unfortunately I’m right there with you. Hopefully sooner rather than later everything works out for you and your family. Best wishes xx
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Thank you for commenting..hopefully better times for all of us..need some good news and a future everyday ppl can look forward too..opportunity and hope are what inspires greatness..and we need to get that back
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Read MoreThe basement smelled like damp carpet and stale beer. Peeling paint curled from the walls like forgotten letters. I sat at the desk with pen and paper. A bottle of absinthe, sweating in the dim light. Van Gogh stared back at me from...
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Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. The seductive spider that calls you back again, to seek more of the elixir that feels like home, only to start the cycle over again. Your an incredible storyteller brother who knows how to paint a picture. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
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Superb contrast between the innocent vulnerable hapless victim and the absinthe and the thieving whore. God, you’re on fire, Thomas.
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Thank you so much.
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Like Jenny from Forest Gump; perhaps she can be reformed. LOL.
Your prose is spot on. The descriptive elements set a shadowy stage, highlights are found in the wording.
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
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Your writing is remarkable. The details and atmosphere are always spot on. Nice work!
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Thanks. I appreciate it.
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Hahaha, it happens, but it’s not just street girls that rob those pockets. Do you know the greater manipulators and thieves some times sleep in our beds. The descriptions within your pieces are as always tight
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
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All you wanted was to write. The repetition of that statement lends itself to the idea of an escape hatch from something. And Jenny wanting a room, also an escape hatch. And that damn bottle of absinthe turned it all inside out. Loved the spider reference. Come into my web…
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Lol. Thank you.
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Read MoreIt was as warm as the living, and as cold as the dead that autumn day in 67’. Very cold my life seemed, advancing into the twilight. As it was October 28th, to be exact, the day...
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Read More(4 verses) You and your immaculate persona, veiled by a silence that no one complains about, a worn-out icon of impossible purity, still sharp as antique glass. (6 verses) You and the witch that inhabits your heart, cold as fire that doesn't touch the skin, a wound...
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wow dearest Par this is deep those damn witchy entities never sure of their purpose grear write ❤️
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For sure never sure of their purpose… Witches.
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. This is a truly amazing write my friend, always love the depth of your work brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Love you, my friend!
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So many awesome lines, wrapped together into a solid poem. It is truly art, Paulo. Your writes are always intriguing to me.
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thanks, my dear friend.
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Damian DeadLove posted in the group Music is Art
“You gotta roll with the punches to get to what’s real.”
David Lee Roth
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Tremendous nostalgia for this time period. Amen, brother.
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Totally agree, brother. Appreciate you.
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Powerfully penned, Mstrmnd. Another excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian