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Read MoreHe traveled across many universes Trying to find the one he had left behind Looking to catch the emotion in verses Versus the different paths that fate had aligned He entered through many doorways and portals Through every gateway and wormhole to explore With a...
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Thank you so much Styxian. It’s my never-ending journey of telling stories in rhyme to engage the reader.
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Beautifully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian. I’ve been working more on rhyme and meter as of late. Always appreciate your reads and comments.
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good morning dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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One of my favorites by you. Excellent writing, Crimsin.
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good morning dearest Tim thank you graciously I’m happy you liked this one ❤️
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Your writing always puts a spell on me. Great work Brenda. xo
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hello dearest Keith thank you you made me smile ❤️
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Magically written, dear Crimsin. Your words are powerful and enchanting!
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good morning beautiful thank you graciously ❤️
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Read MoreLittle bastard, every generation, every town Has a little bastard A window smasher, a bacon rasher Fed on crisp and Choco wafer Mother never kissed it better Nan never nit him a sweater Dad left for her majesties pleasure Alone at home alone at leisure Bored little...
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It makes you think if they have someone to love on them would they end up that way
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Thanks for reading. The system creates problems.
Regards
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Read MoreNumerically correctNew miracles are set to seem improbableVicariously intactThe same old mysteries at hand remain unsolvableI’m incomparableLike a tether to a WiFi wearable in pairing modeHighly programmableWritten to a T-prompt Yet riddled with debunked error codesStopped to a halt...
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Beautiful, Drieks! Keep on, keeping on.
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Thanks so much Atticus!
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Chère D.,
Hope this finds you well?!What a poem!!!
I’d hate to love you
as much as I loved to hate myselfAls dit niet geniaal is, vreet ik mijn hoed op!
Zei de loco plaatsvervangend substituut vooraitter van de Amsterdamse fanclub.Please keep the stamina ens keep them coming!
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Hey Gus!
Thank you! Bedankt voor je mooie woorden!Groetjes!
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics my friend with a stellar accompaniment that compliments your amazing words. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian! 🙏 Appreciate it.
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Your poem reaches out to my soul, dear Drieks. The power that it holds is perfectly transformed into music. Excellent work!
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I must be missing something. I don’t see the song anywhere?
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There should be an audio upload right below the poem. If not, maybe the device you’re on doesn’t support it correctly 🤔
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Thank you for your kind words Elke!
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Oh I love this. You killed it!
I was nodding my head while listening to the song.
Keep pushing forward:)
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Thank you so much Adelphina! 🙏🏻
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Nick DC wrote a new post
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Read MoreI could murder you on 5th avenue piss on your decrepit body wondering how you felt those last moments of breath perhaps scared yet unaware of how I saved you from years of despair because nothing can compare forcing someone to live working them till their bones...
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Nery intimidating piece. You can feel the subtle threat in the words woven here
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Powerfully penned, Nick. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Outstanding write Nick. Nicely done!
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This is an excellent socially critic writing. Especially the perspective it is written from speaks louder than a thousand words. It reflects exactly what we are to the people in power: nothing but in significant bugs. Great work my friend!
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You started this brilliant piece with an almost verbatim quote from the colostomy bag in chief and then proceeded to emphasize how he and those who follow his cult think and feel. Very powerful
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Wow, harsh as fuck!
I’m a bit mind-blown and inspired at the same time.
You have a very crystal edge. x
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Very nicely done. The rhymes are tight. The story is well structured as well.
Great result here.