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uma summultima and
Bluevelvet are now friends
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Crimsin and
Bluevelvet are now friends
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DampKitten wrote a new post
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“GULP!” 😳
Well, Dear Poetess,
So much for the site’s pornagrophy rules … LOL!I’m not so sure it’s all a sin
because done over and again,
there’s a beauty in every stroke
of throaty moans sooo softly spoke.“You hesitate, but in the end,
I smother you in evening sin.
By midnight moon, you drown content
between my legs as I repent.” (there’s nothin’ better’n making-up)Not a lot of metaphor, but loads of excellent imagery, giddy flow, smoothly laid syntax, succulent stimulation, consistent 8-count meter, spot-on rhyme scheme ‘n art choice, and presentation appeal.
It’s more than a little obvious this is definitely not your first poetry rodeo … masterfully done, Lady-Poet.Now, excuse me, please, while I dip my head in a bucket of ice! ⁓ Rascal🖌
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Wow! Wow! Wow!
What a review, Rascal, and thank you for that! I’m honored. I think you covered everything from mechanical technique to emotional effect. Wait… there are rules on this site? Shit. Let me look that up. Hold up, someone’s at the door carrying fuzzy handcuffs – and they’re not in uniform. Let me take a rain check on that.Rascal, this review is amazing. I’m giddy. Thank you!
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DampKitten wrote a new post
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In Xanadu did Kubla Khan
A stately pleasure-dome decree
On railroad tracks I climax
Between them wide I do foresee
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I don’t know… ask Samuel Taylor Coleridge…your Xanadu always reminds me of his Kubla Khan without the trains of course..
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Interesting! I didn’t know about the band name story or anything. Now I feel like listening to Blondie. “)
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First of all, dammit I miss the reading list option. Rest assured I would be smacking that button if it existed here! I absolutely love Blondie! You should have heard me squeal when I saw the title of this episode…before I even opened it. I remember losing my mind whenever they actually played Heart of Glass on MTV back in the day. Something about their music felt natural to me, not as cultivated for the masses of popularity. So excited to see them featured in this episode, my friend! 🙌
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you enjoyed the story my friend. I miss the RL option as well. There is a bookmark option, I guess it’s supposed to be the same thing. lol. I love Blondie. The reunion album was killer. In 1998 they released- “No Exit” the whole album is incredible. Different styles some jazz vibes, some country vibes even. Debbie also raps again. This time on the song, No Exit. She raps with Coolio on the song. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the story my friend. If you loved “Rapture” may I recommend “No Exit” the title track of the album with the same title. It was released in 1998 as a new studio album. The whole album was outstanding with different music styles. But, “No Exit” has rap in it. It’s a collaboration though with Blondie & Coolio. Debbie & Coolio swap back and forth. Killer song. Appreciate you.
Damian
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