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    Evening Sin

    Comes now my midnight lover’s callthat softly echoes down the hall.I pull the sheets and lift my head,then slowly saunter out of bedso careful not to wake your sleepwith all the secrets that I keep.He meets me at the...

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    • If only life was like that…lol

    • Powerful fucking poem. Great work.

    • I think I’d be in sin every part of the day.. if the night started like this! LOL Great poem!!

    • Awesome poem Kitten. You sure know know to heat up a page.

    • Whew!!! Intense indeed
      Very well written.

      Naaj

    • “GULP!” 😳

      Well, Dear Poetess,
      So much for the site’s pornagrophy rules … LOL!

      I’m not so sure it’s all a sin
      because done over and again,
      there’s a beauty in every stroke
      of throaty moans sooo softly spoke.

      “You hesitate, but in the end,
      I smother you in evening sin.
      By midnight moon, you drown content
      between my legs as I repent.” (there’s nothin’ better’n making-up)

      Not a lot of metaphor, but loads of excellent imagery, giddy flow, smoothly laid syntax, succulent stimulation, consistent 8-count meter, spot-on rhyme scheme ‘n art choice, and presentation appeal.
      It’s more than a little obvious this is definitely not your first poetry rodeo … masterfully done, Lady-Poet.

      Now, excuse me, please, while I dip my head in a bucket of ice! ⁓ Rascal🖌

      • Wow! Wow! Wow!
        What a review, Rascal, and thank you for that! I’m honored. I think you covered everything from mechanical technique to emotional effect. Wait… there are rules on this site? Shit. Let me look that up. Hold up, someone’s at the door carrying fuzzy handcuffs – and they’re not in uniform. Let me take a rain check on that.

        Rascal, this review is amazing. I’m giddy. Thank you!

    • Mmmm!
      Something must have inspired me … can’t imagine what it was? ; p

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    Xanadu Railroad

    Carefully, quickly unbuckle your beltLicking your length and patting your peltIgnore the conductor requesting his fareMagma is rising; you're just about thereAgony bellows; I muffle your moansXanadu Railroad, I'm riding you home

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    Backstage (Blondie - Heart Of Glass)

         Welcome Backstage. I’m your host, Damian DeadLove. Tonight we’ll be talking about a band called, Blondie. I got into them when I was a teenager, but I also remember hearing them on the radio a lot when...

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    • Interesting! I didn’t know about the band name story or anything. Now I feel like listening to Blondie. “)
      Well done Damian!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, M.E. So glad you enjoyed the story my friend. I’m glad you learned some things you didn’t know. Listen away, great band. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • First of all, dammit I miss the reading list option. Rest assured I would be smacking that button if it existed here! I absolutely love Blondie! You should have heard me squeal when I saw the title of this episode…before I even opened it. I remember losing my mind whenever they actually played Heart of Glass on MTV back in the day. Something about their music felt natural to me, not as cultivated for the masses of popularity. So excited to see them featured in this episode, my friend! 🙌

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you enjoyed the story my friend. I miss the RL option as well. There is a bookmark option, I guess it’s supposed to be the same thing. lol. I love Blondie. The reunion album was killer. In 1998 they released- “No Exit” the whole album is incredible. Different styles some jazz vibes, some country vibes even. Debbie also raps again. This time on the song, No Exit. She raps with Coolio on the song. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the story my friend. If you loved “Rapture” may I recommend “No Exit” the title track of the album with the same title. It was released in 1998 as a new studio album. The whole album was outstanding with different music styles. But, “No Exit” has rap in it. It’s a collaboration though with Blondie & Coolio. Debbie & Coolio swap back and forth. Killer song. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • First two albums are great. After that they sold out. Great write. Informative and well written.

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