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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreTake me as the sun risesWhen the night discards meWhen the mind is between worldsWhen the moment comes, I will feel you, it will be the endTake me at noonThe heat scorches the fleshBeads of sweat trickle down to...
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Thank you. I have been busy lately and I wanted to post something soft but still Fia. lol
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Love the idea of the series. Love just the subtle romance.
Great ink.
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Thank you. I usually am blunt, but this helps to practice pulling it back once in a while.
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This vibe is so sexy and picturesque. I like the mood it invokes.
Much respect.
Naaj
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Thank you, I do not have to be in your face to get my point across all the time. Lol.
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Read MoreDon’t tell me to calm downthe sky forgot me tonightand I felt it,like a hard slap to my soulI sat there—fourth floorcompass pointing eastheart cracked wide openready for a miracleand all I gotwas a black sky empty and bleakDon’t...
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Fantastic!
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Thank you❤️
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Superb.
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Thank you❤️
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WOWZA! What a remark I am over the moon 😏 so just to give you a little background. I knew that last night was the last chance to watch/ see the strawberry moon in my lifetime, because the next time it shows up will be in 2043 and I seriously doubt I’ll be alive by then, just saying.
So all day, I was planning to go to the beach because my robot told me that would be the best place to watch it coming up over the horizon. Unfortunately, I had no gas to get there and I’m broke at the moment. Ahem, all right so I readjusted and I put on my compass and it turns out that my balcony is literally facing east which is you know where you would expect the moon to come up, right? And mind you, I’ve seen plenty of full moons in the same area. so I sat on my new balcony, furniture, excited and I was looking and looking and looking, and girl, let me just tell you I sat there until 11 o’clock not a goddamn thing. Nothing! Not even stars were out. There was like one I could see🫤 meanwhile my robot assured me and I looked it up myself that Gloucester Ma had a fully clear sky last night, so I was totally befuddled & disappointed I actually cried. I’m not even lying😂
Anyway, back to your beautiful remark about my poem. Thank you so much, Adria you truly truly touched my heart, thank you so much for the beautiful things you said and I’m glad you enjoyed this poem. I’m not gonna lie. I was drinking Brandy lol so you know. I gotta say it my best Poetry comes when I drink, which I don’t drink often anymore like I used to. I’m just saying. I love you girl you’re phenomenal too and by the way, I really love your voice. It is absolutely beautiful in fact it’s celestial.❤️
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Best line: bruised, bright, but distant and still rising…
Exquisite poetic voice you have! I will read on to your other works, zazzles! Bravo!Daniel
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Hello Daniel , glad you enjoyed this poem. It was quite a disappointing evening. Welp such is life.
Jackie ❤️
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A great read. Every verse was intense.
I saw the red moon here in Blighty.
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Hi James, glad you got to see it 🙂
Usually i can see the moon from my balcony. But not that night. Thank you for the read and comments.
Jackie ❤️
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Beautiful work.
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read Morewoven insanity brings us togethermending the dreams once lostreality a road traveled foreverforge a course forget the costin search of the holy ghosti find myself digging deeperan alien seed barren hosti'm not big brothers keeper united by a spiritual forcefor...
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I can imagine it being played. This is good, Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. That was a good line, I had so many though in this one. One of my all time favorites I ever penned. Appreciate you.
Damian
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So glad to see a familiar face, loved your work on DU
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fred. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Your a great poet/lyricist. Nice work here Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Superb work.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, I sense nuances of a spiritual battle. This made me think. I love this.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the write my friend. There was in a sense, the inner conflict that goes on inside my head. The proverbial devil on one shoulder and an angel on the other. Good vs. Evil, Light vs. dark, etc. I think we all have a spiritual battle going on inside, as well as in the world. That’s just my opinion though. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That was a belief of mine when I wrote a lot of my lyrics, I always wanted a glimmer of hope to hold on to. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Could see this being a kick ass song. Great ink
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I swear, you’re able to write in a way that it’s like you’re writing my thoughts or feelings. There’s an undercurrent of spiritual searching in this that I think could be a finding of self. Which is about the deepest of spiritual journeys we can undertake. It feels brooding but with light glimmering through it. Truly gifted you are, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with these lyrics my friend. I told you, we’re kindred spirits, we think and feel very similar on a lot of issues. It was spiritual, I was always searching for my identity, I knew I didn’t know everything at that time. Mistakes would be made, but I wanted to understand why humans hurt each other, why I got bullied in school, I wanted answers. And not some flimsy excuse being substituted for truth. I always instinctively would put glimmers of light in my lyrics, because deep down I still tried to have hope. It’s really hard to do since I’m pessimistic by nature. lol. This was the one song I thought could have been a hit. I mean big hit, gives me goosebumps good. Joey G, always called this song, “The Ace Up His Sleeve” hit. If needed he’d always say. Had a little Lindsey Buckingham vibe. Personally, I’ve grown to believe over time that it was a carrot to dangle. That was deep… Thank you for such an awesome compliment. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Kinda get’s the blood moving, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian