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Read Moresadness quiet and stillmy happiness is in youwaking me earlyand genty waiting on me to answer your silent hellomy Father who leads mewho teaches me your magicwho leaves me hints of knowledgeto lead me onwardyou give me understandingsorrow a...
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hello dearest Damian it’s always hard for me to share my faith because in day passed people let me down but when I really look back I realize our creator didn’t…he is more than fair with me I should be dead already with my careless behavior early in life I am grateful for life even the sorrow… thank you for being here 💕
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“the herd mentality for us is obscene” love this line. Great piece
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hello beautiful Fia thank you the idea we should conform to a stat pattern is ludacris I’m happy this spoke to you 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good evening thank you graciously my friend 💕
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read MoreWishful thinking lead me down this road I needed to find myself along the way So many guilty seeds have been sowed Darkening this field where demons play Walking in shadows searching for light So many summers chasing this illusion Witnessed dreams being killed for...
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Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Tight rhyming, well done Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you, brother.
Damian
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Superb poet you are, Damian. Love your work. Bravo!
Daniel
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Daniel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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”It’s for the love of the write I’m still here”
I can vibe a whole poem to this alone, my bro
It all resonates with me.Much respect
Naaj
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Naaj. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That’s cool, brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That last stanza Damian took home for me. Nice
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I love the last stanza as well. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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This is such a powerhouse of writing. That last stanza seriously resonated with me. Especially that last freaking line. Mic drop, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I was trying to save the best for last. lol. Seriously though, many thanks for the, Mic Drop! Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hoi hoi
Reading time 12 minutes?
It took me 24 minutes. I’ve read it with one hand!
Lovely piece of work!
Love that you wrote it. Love that you posted it.
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Thanks so much Gus. Happy that you found something in it!
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Thank you, Adria! Glad you stopped by.
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreIt starts off full and swelling bursting at the seams as if it will engulf the world in its beauty Slowly, ever so slowlyIt begins to disappearAnd shadow creeps in I secretly prayed for it to stay To embrace me in its warmthMy prayers...
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A good write! I loved your moon analogy. “)
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Thank you, Me;))
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When we’re linked to the moon’s tides…it can get overwhelming. I’m a full-on moon child myself, I get it
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Thank you, Willow;))
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I loved how visual this was, but also in a very subtle way. I could see the sort of waxing and waning pattern but at the same time we weren’t talking about a literal moon, so it was a weird kind of take this very visual thing and make it into a feeling. And then it’s all wrapped up in really beautiful language.
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Thank you, Green;))
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The other morning, I was in a very sexual dream. it was intense! And then my alarm went off and scared the absolute hell outta me. Talk about a rip-off!
Your words reminded me of my own misfortune. LOL
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I was looking out the window at the moon and my mind just went with it. Thank you, Styxian ;))
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An excellent metaphorical take, Fia. Love it.
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Thank you, Tim;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian:))
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The ebb and flow of the man/woman dynamic.
I digs this
Much respect
Naaj
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Thank you, Naaj;))
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Superb work.
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. This was an amazing write my write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian