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hello dearest Thomas good evening thank you graciously have a great night 💕
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Hoi hoi
There’s a theory, that says that the first 4 sentences determine if the reader wil go on reading. In other words, have you captured the attention.And sometimes insidious greed, the needful way one is enough.
Very nice write. Thank you!
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hello good morning dearest Gus I wasn’t writing yesterday and that line kept coming to mind just one line so I sat down and wrote it I’m happy it held your interest and you liked it great eye 💕
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This is wonderful, Brenda. The audio with it makes it come to life for the reader. I did not expect any less from you, of course!
Daniel
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hello dearest Daniel thank you graciously for the love on this write 💕it is deeply appreciated…
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you pardon my tardy response I appreciate you 💕
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Read MoreLoves out of order.Imagined fear/terror.Necessary mental response.Collapse of reason and logic.Rise of despair.Sense of hopelessness.What is sleep?Mind always whirring.Suicidal ideation.Nothing but suffering.A smile from a stranger.A speck of light.A lovely thought.Black turns to grey.Grey turns to beige.Some reason returns.The...
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This is an interesting piece starting off one way and flipping it around. That is how life is, right?
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The first one is better in my opinion. Our minds are a battlefield.
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Read Morereckless understanding, I love painfinding pinpoints of nerves and applying pressureit helps me focus on the deeper things the world spins and I realize I am a part of the mother... Earthevery fiber of my being feels my sibling's painas...
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Every one of us has the power to heal & to harm within us. It’s which course we choose to follow that separates the healers from the rest. Beautiful, Brenda 🧡
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hello lovely Willow this is true it is always my intent to make things nicer it doesn’t always go that way no matter what sometimes thank you for the love on this 💕
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Even with faith we will still struggle. I guess pain is a part of life when it comes. For many, faith has its benefits and joys. For others it’s a fantasy made up by humans. I suppose our minds and how we think plays a big part.
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my faith perhaps is not as strong as others though I do know God I struggle with suffering thank you for your thoughts 💕
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Great write Brenda.
I now realise that pain is quite different from suffering.Most, if not all, our suffering arises in the mind…..
that’s also where peace hangs out.
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hello dearest Benny my mind cause me to hurt with the way I perceive the world… I watch the news and ache with the pain of my brothers and sisters…there is an unrest in me that doesn’t understand such mind scarring events what is the nature of that? thank you for listening 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I deeply appreciate you 💕
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hello lovely Mary good evening thank you beautiful lady most graciously for being so kind 💕
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Read Moresulking in the heated lustshadows of a daunting nature huntsacred understanding victim of the hordeit is an honor to be captive to devilish devices seducing the nightsacrificing tears to the darkon my heart’s altara soul after eon’s scarsentering one life,...
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good morning beautiful poetess thank you graciously from us both it was a pleasure to create with him I’m happy you found it pleasing 💕
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Read MoreI'm a disenchanted weirdosymbolically captivated by the darkmetaphorically mesmerized by sorrowthe kind that envelops your being sadness, bane, it knows my namecorrupting my visions with bleak thoughtson the morrow, sing no more for brighter daysdarkness desires also so with vigor, I...
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This is woven beautifully
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hello beautiful Fia thank you graciously for the love on this 💕
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To me, this poem has shadings of Edgar Allan Poe’s, Alone. Well done 🌼
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I’m not sure if I’ve read it I had a Poe book when I was little it is an honor thank you graciously Joe 💕I always admired his style…
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Stellar imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good afternoon thank you my friend I appreciate you 💕
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Very dark and eerie but interesting. I’m getting a dark witch feel from this one, almost like a Salem witch on the eve of her death. Great read, Crimson.
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hello dearest Tim good evening I love your interpretation thank you 💕
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Vivid and sharp.