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Read MoreYou opened the door,a spill of light illuminating you from behind—the soft blue of your pajamascatching the glow, tracing every quiet detail of you. A chill had whispered through the air,and I saw the way your body listened—a quiet shiver,a tightening,a...
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Thanks Fia!
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Great writing and images. Love it.
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Glad you enjoyed it, Tim!
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Perfect imagery…..at least in my head.
Great write.👍
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In my head too! Thanks for stopping by, Peter.
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Superb work.
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Thanks Thomas!
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Nice. How many of us have written of such a view! Your version is wonderfully attentive without being overtly sexual. It’s about the simplicity of the beautiful construct of her anatomy. Admiration.
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Thank you for such a kind review, Styxian.
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Read MoreIt isn’t solitude that killsbut loneliness.Not the want of company,but the ache left by thosewho once knew your silenceswho once saw into your soul. You can stand in a room bursting with laughter and still feel no touch of being...
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent fucking write my friend. This has layers and I dig layers. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Could feel the hurt in your words my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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An awesome, bittersweet and heart touching poem, dear Crimsin! Brilliantly written!
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Most excellent, my friend. Keep on touching my heart.
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How is it fair to find the perfect one so long after finding your one true love, is it fate showing a sense of humor, Tight
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Brilliant
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Beautiful. Only you can write these sad pieces with such delicate precision.
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Read Moremy mortality before me I prepare an offeringcataloging and willingly admitting my sinheld tight to the dark artist of my soul, there is conflictwith aspirations to the light I am betwixt two worldsand I can't reconcilemy spirit is shaded...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously I deeply appreciate your thoughts ❤️
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Hoi Chère C.,
If I may quote you:
in my slumberous state I cause chaosDon’t we all?
I embrace the thought in real life.
There’s nothing more tedious or boring than perfection.So:
in my slumberous state I cause chaos
Is the cherry on the cake.
Just my opinion.À lovely write!
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hello dearest Gus thank you I likef that line too…I cherish your thoughts you are always positibe and I appreciate that ❤️
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Fantastic spill, my friend! May Arawn hear your darksome call and be your lantern into Annwfn. Not just yet though, we need more of your beautiful melancholy. Excellent poem as always.
Clay
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thank you dearest Clay for such a beautifully poetic comment you are appreciated ❤️
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There is NO SIN in being a woman, none. If there is SIN, it is brought about by the burdens placed on women in a male dominated, patriarchal system and society. It’s a strange evolutionary process that a biological difference (having babies) became the source of oppression.
While I applaud the artistic value of this poem, its sadness, its flow, and metaphor, I am also torn in that there should be no sacrifice made. Instead, there should be a head held high acceptance of the chaos, of celebrating joining the chaos made by all of us as human beings, and we are a chaotic bunch.
Crimsin, I hope I have not trampled all over your poem’s garden, it’s just that women are not evil or gods, just human. And certainly not for sacrifice.
Curt
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hello dearest Curt good afternoon I get what you’re saying but my sin is more memories and reflection on days passed things I have done and regret I try to reconile them in me but they stilll make sad they are coming more ofteh these days and I’m not doing well it seems my soul is aware that my time grows short… I deeply appreciate your beautiful comment ❤️
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Read MoreI died a little yesterday or felt a little deadBut today I'm feeling better It was only in my head.************************Yesterdaysomething in me pressed pause.A heavinessperhaps a tiny death,or maybe justthe absence of myself.I tried to move,but each gesturefelt laboured and opaque like...
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I really like this dearest Benny great photo too ❤️
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Thank you for reading and enjoying.💋
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The mind is a trip… I much enjoyed this one
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The mind is a trap indeed and one that ensnares me from time to time.
Thanks for reading.🙏
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Another excellent write my friend. The mind is full dusty corners, nooks, and crannies where secrets often hide. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That damn wind told her secret. This is good. I enjoyed it