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    Create The Picture

    Styles clash often in writing Collaborations take chemistry  Ego’s can lead to infighting Often shrouded within mystery   When successful it’s grand  Playing to each others strengths Turning glass back into sand Always going to great lengths   Bad vibes will lead to disaster Resorting in Kamikaze antics  Mind starts spinning...

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    • This is a brilliant and honest look at the collaborative process. You perfectly capture the tension and the beauty of it. The line “Turning glass back into sand” is an amazing image for the way things come together.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I love that line as well. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Collaborations are a dance in a way. Got to read your partner. It’s tricky to get magic but when it works it’s beautiful.

      Great ink friend.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It is a dance, that can be magical indeed. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I remember you from the ember DU days (daze?) but our paths never crossed. You were always so encouraging and supportive of fellow comrades. That is an art in itself. Keep writing fella.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Ghosteen. So glad our paths finally crossed then, nice meeting you my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite! Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Great and beautifully written reflections, dear Damian! I agree, the collaboration process is an art itself. Different writing styles collide, and if they are harmonic, the result will read like penned with one ink. When the styles are very different, maybe a piece of abstract art will be created. The diversity of possible collaborations makes them beautiful and interesting!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I agree with you totally, it is like a dance of sorts. But it is a magical process. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Even Lennon and McCartney couldn’t get along in the end. Collaborations are famous throughout history. But sometimes ideas go in different directions, ego’s overtake, and animosity takes over. It can be sad, very sad when things fall apart.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That is true, a lot of duo’s grow apart. People can grow apart over time. Addiction, sobriety, faith, and starting families all have an effect on the collective relationship. It can be sad, indeed. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Friends drift apart. As you mentioned in your last comment. Also we just change. Many things we don’t enjoy or like from when we were kids or teenagers. Keeping a friend or two from your youth though is important. I feel it’s the bridge to a life that was a simpler, more meaningful time. We grow old, but the kid inside never dies. Great write Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Very true, time itself changes people. I’m connected with my inner child. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I always find collaborating incredibly intimidating. How to find a balance where both voices carry equal weight? Some styles are more dominating & others more gentle. But I’ve seen jarringly different styles woven beautifully in a single piece. I love the glass back to sand metaphor. Deconstructing to its base element. All comes from the same beach, as it were. The places your pen travels, my friend…

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. My favorite line! It’s a dance for sure, sometimes teetering on the brink of disaster, only to be saved at the last possible moment of the grand finale. At least that’s my experience with the whole process. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I have been asked many times but even though I am occasionally tempted, I have always tended to shy away .. having said that, I have a great deal of admiration for anyone who chooses to go down that particular poetic and or storytelling route & gets something out of it other than enjoyment or a headache .. I imagine that here you have given this particular reader something to think about long after the curtain has been drawn .. Kindest regards to both you n your pen Damian .. Neville

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’ve collaborated in songwriting, not as much on poetry, though I’ve done a few. It’s a dance basically, and chemistry plays a big part. But it’s a cool experience, never say never my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • It’s an remarkable article in favor of all the online people; they will obtain advantage from it I am sure.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Carolyn. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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    The Great Deceiver

    Fueled by a consuming rage Pointed at every situation  As I fall into the final stage Right before the initiation Locked inside self-torment  Wiggling out of the noose Keeping all the spirits dormant Until madness is busting loose   Pressure building within me Anger clouding all that I see   Face...

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    • This is really good. Damian <3

    • Oh yeah, this one definitely needs a place on the album! I hope it’s coming along well! The halls are a bit echo-ey without you wandering them as often, my friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s going, though it took a while to get my “Logic Pro” software. Which allows me to mix better and I can even master my music with it. But, I got a song mapped out structurally, I have lyrics for everything but the bridge. Which I just came up with that bridge tonight. Gotta record vocals, and backing vocals next. Hopefully, I’ll be letting you hear it soon. I miss you too, my friend. You’ve been penning some excellent work my friend. Thanks for your continued support, it means a lot to me. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Powerful work. Superb.

    • Great work. I get an image of a man struggling with who to trust.

    • I get the sense of internal conflict, and the rhythm and urgency make it clear these are lyrics meant to be performed.

      The energy builds perfectly toward the chorus: “Face to face with destiny…” I especially like the line “Loyal to the art of betrayal” – it’s a great, concise piece of wordplay.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I love that line as well. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • More great lyrics, Damian. Very heavy stuff. I hope to hear the music someday.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. When I get some songs finished, I’ll let you check them out. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • A kickin piece my friend. Your a gift to the world with your writing.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Thanks for the continued support brother, means a lot to me. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Well poemed my friend .. 😎👍

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    Novocain

    Your eyes mesmerize meFollowing my every moveStill wonder what you seeHoping that you approveYour lips blazing like fireFeeling them on my skinHow you take me higherWanting it to never end Every time you're nearPushing me to the brinkMy mind is...

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    • Nice one, Damian. A beautiful women can put a man under a spell that makes him forget any pain.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Very true, totally agree. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Those are amazing lyrics. Love it;))

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Still working on the music, especially the vocals. Appreciate you, cuz.

        Damian

    • hello dearest Damian this is a very great song I can feel your pain❤

    • Second stanza, first line, did you mean “you’re”?

      The repetition really works. And the shield me stanza is so clever and just rolls off the tongue.
      Good, good piece of writing.
      j.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Jacob. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Yes, I did mean “you’re” nice catch. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Awesome! The rhymes and lyrics are infectious. Like an abscess in a tooth! Nice work dude!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. It’s got music as well, though I’m still working on the music. I’ll let you check it out when it’s completed, nice to see you my brother. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • The interesting thing about this one is that, depending on how it’s read, it could be a woman or an addiction. Very clever use of words here, my friend!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Nice catch, you’re on the right path. It has a lot of meanings to me as well. This is the song I’m currently putting music to. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Can heat it already. Great work. Good luck on the solo album.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Thank you, I need all the luck I can get. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Some people shy away from a poem that’s composed of rhyme. I’ve always felt that there’s a finesse to it that has to be refined like a piece of art. You have that quality. It speaks volumes, Damian!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Kelly. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. What a lovely comment, so kind of you. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • The lyrics are so lovely, I feel the intensity of the emotions…the push and pull, the thrill and the ache. and the repeated chorus of “sweet novocain” lingers like a haunting, addictive melody. I’d love to hear you sing this. It’s beautiful

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Well vocally I’m doing my best, I’m not the greatest singer. lol. I’ll share the song when it’s complete. Thanks so much for your support. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like that it has multiple meanings, I always dig those kind of writes. Bon Jovi style, that’s a unique way of putting it, but
      I like it. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • I sense there is more to this than presently meets the eye .. Good luck with production .. I suspect it will do well ..
      Neville 😎👍

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I will admit there are multiple meanings to this one. That’s the beauty of words, In my opinion. I need all the luck I can find, thanks for offering some. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • My absolute pleasure ..

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    Judge Not

    unbiased beliefs mere reflections judge not those who differ   tainted thoughts so abstract judge not those who think   unconditional true connection judge not those who love   sentimental warm gesture judge not those who share   born unafraid in the moment judge not those who live       Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2015

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    • Great message. Unfortunately I’m in a bit of a pissy mood with people these days. Wish we could all just not judge.

      Great ink

    • Yes, I can see the late night musings in this cuz. Love the message

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. This was probably one of my earliest musings. Appreciate you, cuz.

        Damian

    • Easier said than done, my friend. Still.. all we can do is our best – to live and let live. When my trust, belief and love take a hit I will remember to revisit this write. Inspiring message, thank you for the share.

      Clay

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Clay. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It is easier said than done, all we can strive for is our best efforts towards the matter. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Fantastic work. Good message.

    • I’ve always tried to hold the words “you don’t know” in the back of my mind with others. You don’t know their story, you don’t know how far they’ve fallen or how far they’ve come. You just don’t know, so don’t judge. I’ve always felt differences were beautiful. It’s what adds texture to humanity. Another fantastic write, my friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I agree, when one doesn’t know, all they can do is assume. Assumption is the mother of all fuck ups! In my honest opinion. Differences are what makes each of us unique, I embrace that. Always dig your commentary. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Very much enjoyed .. Neville

    • You never know the truths behind someones personality. Message is clear & optimistic. Well done Damian.

    • Our differences spice up and beautify our lives. They offer a wonderful opportunity to learn more about this world and all its varieties.
      Even if it is about the topic you absolutely don’t agree, don’t judge or hate. This makes the situation even worse. Try to stay open-minded and compassionate instead and your mind will be free to find the best solution.
      An awesome and brilliantly written poem, dear Damien!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I couldn’t agree with you more. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • A beautiful and insistent plea for universal acceptance. Its rhythmic, repeated structure powerfully drives home the message that true connection requires us to simply “judge not” those who are different. Resonates in every line and leaves a quiet, lasting impact.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the write my friend. In a perfect world I imagine it would be like this write, I try to remain hopeful of humanity, though it’s not always easy. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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    Bow Out

    My circle seems to be getting smaller Does change scare people away? It seems kinda funny sometimes  My friends don’t like self-improvement  Why bother hovering around here All you wanna do is fucking drink Piss and moan about everything Blame everyone not named you   Toxic environment inside...

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    • Good write, Damian. There’s always that “Lord Of The Flys” affect when too many egos are involved. I’m glad you broke away.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You can say that again, I’m glad I broke away as well. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Sometimes when we opt to bow out, we find amazing things. Where you go will always be determined by you that way. What they do? As my daughter would say, that’s a them problem. Fly, my friend!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Very true, I unlocked a different world from the one I knew before. So glad I opted out of that toxic environment. A them problem, indeed. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I’ve been there. I know the animosity that grows over time slowly until it boils over. It’s very disappointing after it’s all over and done. It keeps going through your mind even years later. Good one, Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It does kinda always stick in the recesses of my mind. In the words of DLR: “I knew I had company.” You’ve been there as well. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Tremendous work, my friend.

    • We are always in a state of change. I’m trying to let go of past events. People may read a piece or two about enduring an horrific childhood but there comes a point to emerge as the survivor and not dwell on what can’t be changed.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Paula. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That we are, sounds like wise words to me. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • That’s some fantastic venting. “Blame everyone not named you”. I been butting heads lately with someone like this.

      Great ink.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with write my friend. Then you know the feeling, not easy people to deal with. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Everyone Sux! Powerful write Damian.

    • As I’m new here and don’t know your story and I don’t know the background to your write here but I loved it’s raw energy the swearing 🤬 even and the emotion the regrets (if any )self doubt of your decision (probably not ) and the style so
      When you gotta go you just gotta go ! A new chapter awaits you

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Julie. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I have no regrets, I started a new chapter in my life, as well as in my creative journey. Welcome to Stars Rite! Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Hi all good Thanks have a good day

    • Wow, that’s incredibly raw and honest. You really capture the intensity and eventual breaking point of that kind of toxic partnership. It’s great to hear your creativity has resurfaced– you definitely ended on the strongest note by realizing you decide when to bow out.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It was definitely toxic, it took me getting sober and about two and a half years before I started writing again. Then I was at DUP for about 10 months before it closed. It was because of that community I found myself again. I moved here with some of them and am watching the Stars Rite community grow into something special, this is my home now. Sorry for rambling on, I do that sometimes. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Don’t ya just know when enough is enough .. Well penned my friend .. 😎👍

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