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Read MoreHey there, What’s up?I haven’t seen you in a while.Never figured I would run into you here.You look good. Did you lose some weight?Well, that’s great! Did you ever get married to your sweetheart in high school?Oh. Well, that’s...
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Appreciate it Dampkitten. Thanks for the feedback.
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Well…fuck.. this wasn’t what I was expecting. But damn was it good. Talk about a plot twist! You’ve done it again Vision. I like it! xx
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I do enjoy a plot twist from time to time. Thanks P.G for the comments.
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Vivid and sharp. Very creative.
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Thanks Thomas. Appreciated!
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What have I just read?! Fight club and Identity had a baby poem.
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YES! Great description here M.E. Thanks for the comments.
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WHAT’S THE FUCKING ISSUE?!?
OK THEN! YOU ASKED FOR IT!!Felt this deep. Very creative, Keith xoxo
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Appreciate it Fia. Thanks! xx
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Thanks!
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Fight Club vibes, Keith. The Dr. Seuss of horror my friend. Great write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks for the comments. Always…
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Read MoreYou glide your thumb across my lips My tongue darts out to taste Both of us aware of our own thirst For the other Leaning in close as if pulled Breathing in each other breaths Time is slow and absurdly fast My head tilts to a...
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You are HOT as shit, just like always… and I’m all about Tequila.
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Hmm Damp Kitten and tequila. Tasty. Thank you ❤️
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Now I am drunk on these lines!
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The lines… or…? lol
Thank you, M.E
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E..ve..ry..th..ing!
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Well, that is tempting. ;))
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Intoxicating write, Fia. The room always gets hot when you spill, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Need some heat over here.;))
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very hot
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Thank you, Ambjr;))
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Read MoreHow could something so angelic, look so deadly? Eyes of temptation, with a stare that is deathly. Hips and curves, willing any man to his knees. Full lips, painted a crimson red, plump and beautiful like they were stung by bees. Gorgeous features that scream, DROP DEAD. Watching her...
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Desert rose..Kiss of death. Are you trying to kills us all softly and sweetly, Poetic Gawdess?! Hehehe
Joking aside, I liked many lines. Especially this one: “..there are no survivors
to tell truth of her myths.” Wow! Reminds me of Medusa.
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Awww, M.E but where is the fun in that? All good things come with a little temptation and a walk on the dark side.. ☺️ But in all honesty I also thought of Medusa in that line.. because I have a hard on for her and other beauties of the mythological history. I do appreciate the kind words! Thanks for reading. xx
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Very true indeed. Like flies to honey; thanks for reading Dragon-Fire. xx
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Your poetry kicks ass. Reminds me of some erotic thriller film from the early 90’s they’d air on HBO or Showtime.
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Awww Vision, you sure know how to make a girl blush ☺️ thank you for reading! xx
~P.G💋
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Sirens on the shore! I love how you use rhyme, and the imagery is so alluring… much like those deadly mermaids. Oh, to be Odysseus tied to the mast screaming to be loosed. You capture the vision.
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You get it, you get me! Haha thank you so much for reading and for the comment! xx
~P.G💋
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Nice tight little poem. Il bacio della morte. There are worse ways to die 🌼
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Hey, Average Joe, I do appreciate the read. And I agree with you, it’s a pretty bad ass way to go. xx
~P.G💋
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This is a sensually woven warning, very cleverly worded. Definitely paints potent imagery
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Willow, I sincerely thank you for your kind comment! I definitely was hoping to paint a mental image and I am glad to know that I delivered. xx
~P.G💋
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Beautifully penned, P.G. Great storytelling & terrific imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I thank you, my friend. It’s always a pleasure to see you in my comment section. xx
~P.G💋
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Angel, thank you. To be honest, sometimes I’ll start a poem and have absolutely no idea where I’m going with it. But this piece particularly flowed effortlessly because those exact sirens came to mind. I wanted to capture their alluring nature and present it in this poem in the form of a woman, because we know just how tempting we can be. I appreciate your kind words. xx
~P.G💋
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You have a wild imagination, VOI. I wasn’t expecting a psychotic suicide. But yeah, this is definitely a vision of insanity… true to form!